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fellowshippers2004-02-25 10:51 pm
harley-fic.livejournal.com) wrote in fellowshippers2004-02-25 10:51 pm
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My first lotrps fic, a Viggo/Orlando that would not be in this community were it not for ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
1420. I'm sketchy on the title, but for now it's called What Is Left To Him. Any other suggestions would be welcome, because I completely suck at titles.
I don't do ratings, but let's call it an R for the sake of argument. I'm looking for any serious critical feedback anyone wants to throw my way. I don't know why I had to pick the hardest possible character to start out with, but there you go.
What Is Left To Him
1420. I'm sketchy on the title, but for now it's called What Is Left To Him. Any other suggestions would be welcome, because I completely suck at titles.I don't do ratings, but let's call it an R for the sake of argument. I'm looking for any serious critical feedback anyone wants to throw my way. I don't know why I had to pick the hardest possible character to start out with, but there you go.
What Is Left To Him
Re: oh my.
I was trying really hard to make his emotions palpable and you make me feel as if I've succeeded. And man, the characterization. That was my biggest concern with Viggo, so thank you for saying that.
Also, your icon? tres funny.