Sonsy (
seethingheathen.livejournal.com) wrote in
fellowshippers2003-12-26 09:54 am
Fic. Dom/Orli. R.
Title: Snoop
Author:
limeysugar
Feedback: Please.
Pairing: Dom/Orli
Rating: Probably R. Strong R, I reckon. Language and all that.
Disclaimers: Not true. . .blah, blah, blah.
Summary: Dom is a bit nosy.
A/N: Just something else I wrote a while ago. I need to write some new stuff one of these days.
[pov: dom]
What have we here? Orlando really shouldn’t leave his carry-all open like this. Someone could accidentally see what’s inside.
Toothpaste, toothbrush, comb.
Oh, my. Euro-Boys. Interesting. Condoms. Lube. Oh, Orlando, you’re a dirty boy.
[pov: orlando]
Where the fuck? I know I packed it. I think I packed it. Now what the bloody hell am I supposed to read?
Who’s knocking at my fucking door? Just want to have a quick wank and go to bed, God Damnit. “Yeah?”
“Hey, Orli? ’S Dom. Can I come in?”
Sure, why the hell not? “Come on in, mate.”
He’s got his hands behind his back. Oh, shit.
“Looking for this?” Fuck. Fuck.
“. . .” I have no idea what to say. None.
“It is yours, isn’t it?”
[pov: dom]
“What were you doing looking through my things?” He’s sort of pissed off, I think.
“Your bag was open-”
“It was on the bottom, Dominic.” Oh, yes. He’s angry. Good. I want to ask him if he’s on the bottom. If he likes to fuck or be fucked.
“I never knew, Orli. All this time we’ve been here together, and I never knew.”
“Well, now you do. Go ahead. Say it.”
“Say what, Orlando?” Say that if I’d known before, we could have been fucking like rabbits?
[pov: orlando]
He’s not calling me queer. He’s walking toward my bed though. Hell, maybe he’s gonna hit me.
No, he’s going to kiss me. Oh, Jesus Christ. Sweet-motherfucking-Jesus-Christ. He tastes good.
“Mmm . . .” is all of his name I can get out.
Oh. His hand is. There.
“I want to fuck you Orlando. Do dirty things to you.”
“Yes, Dom. Fuck me, Dom.”
[pov: dom]
“How do you want it?”
“Hard.”
“How hard?” Tell me, baby. Tell me how hard you fucking want it.
“Hurt me.”
X-posted to
dorli.
Author:
Feedback: Please.
Pairing: Dom/Orli
Rating: Probably R. Strong R, I reckon. Language and all that.
Disclaimers: Not true. . .blah, blah, blah.
Summary: Dom is a bit nosy.
A/N: Just something else I wrote a while ago. I need to write some new stuff one of these days.
[pov: dom]
What have we here? Orlando really shouldn’t leave his carry-all open like this. Someone could accidentally see what’s inside.
Toothpaste, toothbrush, comb.
Oh, my. Euro-Boys. Interesting. Condoms. Lube. Oh, Orlando, you’re a dirty boy.
[pov: orlando]
Where the fuck? I know I packed it. I think I packed it. Now what the bloody hell am I supposed to read?
Who’s knocking at my fucking door? Just want to have a quick wank and go to bed, God Damnit. “Yeah?”
“Hey, Orli? ’S Dom. Can I come in?”
Sure, why the hell not? “Come on in, mate.”
He’s got his hands behind his back. Oh, shit.
“Looking for this?” Fuck. Fuck.
“. . .” I have no idea what to say. None.
“It is yours, isn’t it?”
[pov: dom]
“What were you doing looking through my things?” He’s sort of pissed off, I think.
“Your bag was open-”
“It was on the bottom, Dominic.” Oh, yes. He’s angry. Good. I want to ask him if he’s on the bottom. If he likes to fuck or be fucked.
“I never knew, Orli. All this time we’ve been here together, and I never knew.”
“Well, now you do. Go ahead. Say it.”
“Say what, Orlando?” Say that if I’d known before, we could have been fucking like rabbits?
[pov: orlando]
He’s not calling me queer. He’s walking toward my bed though. Hell, maybe he’s gonna hit me.
No, he’s going to kiss me. Oh, Jesus Christ. Sweet-motherfucking-Jesus-Christ. He tastes good.
“Mmm . . .” is all of his name I can get out.
Oh. His hand is. There.
“I want to fuck you Orlando. Do dirty things to you.”
“Yes, Dom. Fuck me, Dom.”
[pov: dom]
“How do you want it?”
“Hard.”
“How hard?” Tell me, baby. Tell me how hard you fucking want it.
“Hurt me.”
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Is there more???
That was...wow. Smokin' hot. *opens a window*
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thankyou! =D
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but i'm happy to see you enjoyed this bit. thankyou!
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But but... it's so GOOD! MORE please?? *pouts*
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“Hurt me.” - GUH. That one little answer is the hottest answer in the world. Yum.
MWAH!
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that last line. guuuuuh.
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thankyou! =D
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