Fic. Dom/Orli. R.

Title: Snoop
Author: [livejournal.com profile] limeysugar
Feedback: Please.
Pairing: Dom/Orli
Rating: Probably R. Strong R, I reckon. Language and all that.
Disclaimers: Not true. . .blah, blah, blah.
Summary: Dom is a bit nosy.
A/N: Just something else I wrote a while ago. I need to write some new stuff one of these days.



[pov: dom]

What have we here? Orlando really shouldn’t leave his carry-all open like this. Someone could accidentally see what’s inside.

Toothpaste, toothbrush, comb.

Oh, my. Euro-Boys. Interesting. Condoms. Lube. Oh, Orlando, you’re a dirty boy.


[pov: orlando]

Where the fuck? I know I packed it. I think I packed it. Now what the bloody hell am I supposed to read?

Who’s knocking at my fucking door? Just want to have a quick wank and go to bed, God Damnit. “Yeah?”

“Hey, Orli? ’S Dom. Can I come in?”

Sure, why the hell not? “Come on in, mate.”

He’s got his hands behind his back. Oh, shit.

“Looking for this?” Fuck. Fuck.

“. . .” I have no idea what to say. None.

“It is yours, isn’t it?”


[pov: dom]

“What were you doing looking through my things?” He’s sort of pissed off, I think.

“Your bag was open-”

“It was on the bottom, Dominic.” Oh, yes. He’s angry. Good. I want to ask him if he’s on the bottom. If he likes to fuck or be fucked.

“I never knew, Orli. All this time we’ve been here together, and I never knew.”

“Well, now you do. Go ahead. Say it.”

“Say what, Orlando?” Say that if I’d known before, we could have been fucking like rabbits?


[pov: orlando]

He’s not calling me queer. He’s walking toward my bed though. Hell, maybe he’s gonna hit me.

No, he’s going to kiss me. Oh, Jesus Christ. Sweet-motherfucking-Jesus-Christ. He tastes good.

“Mmm . . .” is all of his name I can get out.

Oh. His hand is. There.

“I want to fuck you Orlando. Do dirty things to you.”

“Yes, Dom. Fuck me, Dom.”


[pov: dom]

“How do you want it?”

“Hard.”

“How hard?” Tell me, baby. Tell me how hard you fucking want it.

“Hurt me.”


X-posted to [livejournal.com profile] dorli.

[identity profile] thingsunseen.livejournal.com 2003-12-26 11:52 am (UTC)(link)
*meep*

Is there more???

That was...wow. Smokin' hot. *opens a window*

[identity profile] thalassatx.livejournal.com 2003-12-26 12:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Shhhhyeah!! MORE!

[identity profile] thalassatx.livejournal.com 2003-12-26 12:23 pm (UTC)(link)
*frustrated noise*

But but... it's so GOOD! MORE please?? *pouts*

[identity profile] ladyinsomnia.livejournal.com 2003-12-26 02:34 pm (UTC)(link)
“How hard?” Tell me, baby. Tell me how hard you fucking want it.

“Hurt me.”
- GUH. That one little answer is the hottest answer in the world. Yum.

MWAH!

[identity profile] myheadgames.livejournal.com 2003-12-26 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
guh.

that last line. guuuuuh.

[identity profile] thalassatx.livejournal.com 2003-12-26 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh!! Well, why didn't ya say so!? :) *looks satisfied*

[identity profile] autotomy.livejournal.com 2003-12-27 12:57 am (UTC)(link)
that was really good. v. breezy and to the point. and i can totally picture dom being this nosy bastard and orli calling him on it.