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karelian ([personal profile] karelian) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2003-02-11 01:01 pm

FIC: All Right (SB/VM, R, 1/1)

Because my friends are Evil Minions and hopeless romantics, occasionally I end up talking to them in the evening and then having really warped dreams. What follows is one such example. Please don't expect originality or cleverness; my subconscious mind has neither of those things, only smarminess.

Summary: It takes Sean a few minutes to figure out what he offered and what Viggo accepted.

Disclaimer: This is fiction, never happened, never will.

( All Right )

[identity profile] gotham-syren.livejournal.com 2003-02-12 06:43 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is so beautiful it makes me want to cry. Really. I love it, had to read it again today. The slow-motion unfolding of emotions is just. Perfect. It's so hard to get scenes like this to ring true (and not be schmoopy or melodramatic), but this does. Loved so many of the lines, hard to pick just a phrase or two:

Asleep, he loses his manic edge and solid bearing, as well as the flickers of distance and shyness that sometimes make him seem there and not-there all at once. Viggo's arms drape in front of his chest and his long legs bend at the knee so that his feet can press the armrest.

I can see Viggo *so* clearly, described this way. ::sigh:: Don't often admit to my hopeless romantic side, but... ya got me. Thank you...

[identity profile] gotham-syren.livejournal.com 2003-02-12 07:25 am (UTC)(link)
Ok, so how is that *you* get to have dreams about VigBean, and all I get are dreams that I'm back in high school and haven't studied for my final exams? Damn. Some chics have all the luck.