FIC: All Right (SB/VM, R, 1/1)

[karelian]

Because my friends are Evil Minions and hopeless romantics, occasionally I end up talking to them in the evening and then having really warped dreams. What follows is one such example. Please don't expect originality or cleverness; my subconscious mind has neither of those things, only smarminess.

Summary: It takes Sean a few minutes to figure out what he offered and what Viggo accepted.

Disclaimer: This is fiction, never happened, never will.

( All Right )

Comments

[cupiscent.livejournal.com]

Lovely. So very real and immediate (in ways that had nothing to do with the second-person POV but everything to do with tone and pace and description) that it just settled over me with a faint sigh. Unravelling with ease into something beautiful and hopeful and full of promise.

This was something very special. Thank you.

[karelian]

Thank you! I wish I could write fic as elegant as your feedback! Beautiful and hopeful and full of promise is what I hope for...