ext_16262 ([identity profile] flumsan.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2004-03-21 07:36 pm

HELP! *quick*

which sentence looks best to you?

(Because why should he dream when his life seemed to be a living dream?)

(What was the use in dreaming when his life seemed to have turned into one?)

(Why should he dream when his one dream of true love just had become reality?)

Any other suggestions?

*dies*

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