anything but cute.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_riz/]

Title: "Anything But Cute"
Author: Riz (rizaelle)
Pairing: Elijah/Dominic
Rating: R (Not as smutty as last time, but I still love the F word.)
Summary: It's fun to watch Elijah squirm, in more ways than one.
Disclaimer: Consider it all disclaimed.
Archive: Please don't. I'm paranoid. (Posted at domlijah and fellow_shippers; archived at Mirrormere.)
Feedback: Yes, please.
Author's Note: Warning: FLUFF! Cute stuff kinda squicks me and I never thought I'd write it. But seeing as my first one was a dirrty angst-fest, and the next one will be a dirrty angst-fest, I thought I'd give something nice a shot. Does it work? I don't know. Also, this was supposed to be short. Like, less than a page long. Erk. I didn't even get around to exorcising the bunny until near the very end. Oops. :::hands fluffy bunny back to barefootatkheb:::

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Comments

[http://users.livejournal.com/_doodle/]

That was gorgeous and cute, and I adored it.

There's been some really bad fic lurking lately, and it was such a relief to read this and instead of being disapointed, being captivated and left with a smile.

Fantastic. I especially love the image of Dom drawing all over Elijah's body in the night, and then playing naughts and crosses on each others arms.

<3
Doodle

[http://users.livejournal.com/_riz/]

Thank you. ^__^ And, yay! I'm very happy to have provided some relief from the rumored bad!fic onslaught instead of adding to it. ;)

[girlandetc.livejournal.com]

Now things are going to be Weird™ between them. Wonderful. Stupid beer. Stupid Dom and his stubble and his sexy fucking shoulders.

No, no, he did not just think that.

AHAHAHA <3 stupid dom :P that was really cute and happy and sexy, too. mmm.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_riz/]

*giggles* Thank you. Yes, stupid stupid cruel sexy Dom...

[moonie]

Lovely!

But er, you want that to say "Endlich." not "Schließlich." It's a context thing. :)

[http://users.livejournal.com/_riz/]

::giggles:: I was *waiting* for something about that... I thought, "Wow, it's too easy" when the online dictionaries seemed to agree on just one word for "finally" and "at last." ;)

[moonie]

Heh. They both mean the same thing of course, but "endlich" means "finally" in the sense of "at last", while "schließlich" means "finally" in the sense of "in conclusion" or "after all".

[http://users.livejournal.com/_riz/]

Well, thanks for the help! ::changes words:: ....my grasp of German doesn't go beyond a handful of Rammstein lyrics. ^__^;;

[seeing-stars.livejournal.com]

Squee! Me likes!!

When I read "Endlich" I giggled, cus I do german at school and knew what it meant. Teehee!! Love it!! *bounce*

[msilverstar]

I like this very very much, your Elijah-voice is charming. I was apparently ready for something sweet and fluffy and with only a tiny bit of angst.

[bungee.livejournal.com]

Aww, too cute. ^^ And hot. And ...um. Yes. :) Luffly.

Gorgeous

[musosteph.livejournal.com]

Very very cool - lovely images at the end of a crappy day :)

[the-larch.livejournal.com]

This was truly glorious and hot and sweet and beautiful and so well written, and I love you for creating it and for sending it out into the void for me to read. (And your characterizations are perfect.) Thank for it. ::hugs::

[http://users.livejournal.com/_riz/]

Eek.. thanks so much. ^__^

[elliebethany.livejournal.com]

Whee, I love this. Most definitely definitely works. *huge grin*

[http://users.livejournal.com/_riz/]

Hee, thank you. ^_^

[sparktastic.livejournal.com]

Adorable.

I so love it.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_riz/]

Thank you, love. ^o^

[wordsandkay.livejournal.com]

This is DELIGHTFUL!! I loved it, love your effortless style, love Elijah's internal monologue, love Dominic speaking German...Fantastic. *applause*

[http://users.livejournal.com/_riz/]

*squeak* Thank you so much.

It always surprises me to get feedback on old posts out of nowhere. Yay. ^__^

[tripping-sin.livejournal.com]

man, i loved this and i don't even *like* domlijah. i'm glad i followed qoala's rec here! very, very nice.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_riz/]

Wow, that was unexpected. Thanks! May I ask where it was rec'd?

[tripping-sin.livejournal.com]

here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/queenofalostart/199951.html)

good recs are love! la la la.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_riz/]

Oh, wow. Thanks for pointing that out. ^_^;