ext_22351 ([identity profile] wasted-hope.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2004-03-04 08:49 pm

unlocked [1/1], dorli;dominijah OR orlijah, r, drabble.

title: unlocked.
rating: r.
pairing: orli/dom; dom/lijah OR orli/lijah (depends on how you want to view it).
story type: drabble, pwp.
word count: 100.
summary: elijah sees something he's not supposed to.
author's note: this is the story that while i was writing it in english class this one chick said, "you're writing nasty stuff." compared to other stuff out there, this is pure fluff, lol. beta'd by [livejournal.com profile] naughtynick, thanks love.

x-posted to [livejournal.com profile] dorli


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Their skin was glistening with sweat, bodies moving in complete perfection as the tall, tan, muscular boy sweetly slipped into the sandy-blonde beneath him. The toned muscles in the tanned back flexed with each inward trust – the boy beneath him letting out a small cry each time. The sounds slipping past their lips were music to anyones' ears.

Except the boy’s in the doorway.

Silent tears slipped from bright blue eyes as he watched from the cracked doorway, but the two bodies moving in their perfect unison on the small cot in the trailer did not notice him at all.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_reality_/ 2004-03-05 02:00 am (UTC)(link)
*sighs*
Oh that's beautiful. As Orlijah is my favorite pairing, I imagined that Orlando was the one cheating on Elijah. This story was short and angsty--so beautiful. Like a poem.
*sighs and reads it again*

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_theo/ 2004-03-05 11:30 am (UTC)(link)
So sad and heartbreaking.

but Elijah should have joined in. omg orgy

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_reality_/ 2004-03-05 03:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Seriously one of my favorite fics. Mind if I friend you to see what else you come up with in the future? Do you have any other Orlijah fics?