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Hello I am new.
Hey there, I am new to the comunity and I thought I would just post this fic I wrote.
It is my first ever RPS so any comments/feedback would be muchly appreciated.
Title: In Dreams
Author: The Irrepressible Andromeda Took
Pairing: Dombilllijah
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Only ever happened in my head!
Summary: Dreams and foodstuffs. PWP.
Authors notes: Dedicated to,![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
zahz87 she being the one who converted me to writing RPS.
Elijah was dreaming again, tossing and turning restlessly in his bed, which creaked and groaned under his weight. It had been happening more often lately, he had found himself in the seclusion of slumber, having dreams that would have turned his face a furious shade of red in waking hours.
He would never admit it in the light of day, these dreams were a closely guarded secret, a secret he had never shared with anyone.
This particular one was about ice cream.
"Ooooh" he moaned low in his throat as he felt the icy coolness hit his bare chest, and then warmth from Billy's tongue as it followed the sticky trail down to his belly, flicking deftly to scoop the last drops from his navel. Then cold again as Dom dribbled more of the now rapidly melting ice cream for Billy to eat from Elijah's skin, leaning down himself and sucking at a pert nipple.
Elijah was painfully hard in his trousers, but so far the two had maintained their tease by not touching at all the place where he so desperately wanted to be touched. He rocked his hips in a silent plea, but Billy just chuckled and muttered something to Dom like "begging for it as usual" before returning his head to the task of cleaning Elijah's skin of the ice cream.
"Oh please, guys, I can't take this"
A tongue danced about the hem of his trousers, flicking temptingly inside and Elijah pushed upwards to the touch, whimpering uncontrollably. "He really is hot tonight" Dom raised his eyebrow's at Billy and Elijah felt sure that he had winked as a wicked grin spread across his face.
"Mmmm, we should cool him down don't you think?"
"Only fair after all, since it's our fault"
They exchanged a knowing glance with each other and set about removing Elijah's trousers.
"Holy shit!" Elijah bucked wildly as the icy cold substance landed on his erection and arched his back as he felt two tongues stroking against his flesh, lapping in lazy circles.
"Fuck" he screamed
"Not yet" came the muted reply, but Elijah couldn't tell who had said it.
More ice cream now, and then a mouth closed around his cock and sucked, heat raced its way up and down his spine, setting all his nerve endings aflame before the mouth moved off and more ice cream was drizzled onto his skin.
"Oh fuck, Billy, Dom, please" he whined, twisting his head from side to side.
"Still too hot I think Bills, better cool him down some more"
That wonderful mouth closed around him again, covering his throbbing cock completely, he rocked wildly crying out as he did so.
"Oh hell, please, Aaahhh god"
Dom moved up the bed, dipping his finger into the ice cream and reaching to Elijah's mouth for him to suck it off. Elijah did, relishing the coolness as it ran down his throat, swirling his tongue around the tip of the offered finger and watching Dom's face closely as he did so. Fire flickered in those dark blue-grey pools, barely contained lust and Dom licked his bottom lip, almost as if he wasn't aware he had done it.
Dom dipped his finger back into the ice cream, and again offered his finger to Elijah, who took it greedily, drawing it fully into his mouth and sucking it hard. Dom moaned out loud and pulled it out quickly to replace it with his lips and tongue.
Warmth, moisture, need. These were the only things Elijah could think now as he had both Billy's and Dom's mouths upon him. He cried out into Dom's mouth as Billy moved in a rapidly increasing rhythm, easily arousing him to the point where he would release and then backing down slightly and drawing near painful sensations to him.
"Oh fuck Billy, please, now!" He cried out shamelessly, unable to even think anymore, only feel as Billy slowed to almost no movement whatsoever, pulling up his shaft until just the head of it was in his mouth and holding there, flicking the slit with his tongue rapidly.
"Oh fuck, oh fuck, god please, now, oh please?"
Billy pushed his head down swiftly, taking Elijah deep into his throat in one stroke, and Elijah screamed, came hard into Billy's mouth.
And woke from his dream, covered in sweat and tangled in the blankets.
It is my first ever RPS so any comments/feedback would be muchly appreciated.
Title: In Dreams
Author: The Irrepressible Andromeda Took
Pairing: Dombilllijah
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Only ever happened in my head!
Summary: Dreams and foodstuffs. PWP.
Authors notes: Dedicated to,
zahz87 she being the one who converted me to writing RPS.Elijah was dreaming again, tossing and turning restlessly in his bed, which creaked and groaned under his weight. It had been happening more often lately, he had found himself in the seclusion of slumber, having dreams that would have turned his face a furious shade of red in waking hours.
He would never admit it in the light of day, these dreams were a closely guarded secret, a secret he had never shared with anyone.
This particular one was about ice cream.
"Ooooh" he moaned low in his throat as he felt the icy coolness hit his bare chest, and then warmth from Billy's tongue as it followed the sticky trail down to his belly, flicking deftly to scoop the last drops from his navel. Then cold again as Dom dribbled more of the now rapidly melting ice cream for Billy to eat from Elijah's skin, leaning down himself and sucking at a pert nipple.
Elijah was painfully hard in his trousers, but so far the two had maintained their tease by not touching at all the place where he so desperately wanted to be touched. He rocked his hips in a silent plea, but Billy just chuckled and muttered something to Dom like "begging for it as usual" before returning his head to the task of cleaning Elijah's skin of the ice cream.
"Oh please, guys, I can't take this"
A tongue danced about the hem of his trousers, flicking temptingly inside and Elijah pushed upwards to the touch, whimpering uncontrollably. "He really is hot tonight" Dom raised his eyebrow's at Billy and Elijah felt sure that he had winked as a wicked grin spread across his face.
"Mmmm, we should cool him down don't you think?"
"Only fair after all, since it's our fault"
They exchanged a knowing glance with each other and set about removing Elijah's trousers.
"Holy shit!" Elijah bucked wildly as the icy cold substance landed on his erection and arched his back as he felt two tongues stroking against his flesh, lapping in lazy circles.
"Fuck" he screamed
"Not yet" came the muted reply, but Elijah couldn't tell who had said it.
More ice cream now, and then a mouth closed around his cock and sucked, heat raced its way up and down his spine, setting all his nerve endings aflame before the mouth moved off and more ice cream was drizzled onto his skin.
"Oh fuck, Billy, Dom, please" he whined, twisting his head from side to side.
"Still too hot I think Bills, better cool him down some more"
That wonderful mouth closed around him again, covering his throbbing cock completely, he rocked wildly crying out as he did so.
"Oh hell, please, Aaahhh god"
Dom moved up the bed, dipping his finger into the ice cream and reaching to Elijah's mouth for him to suck it off. Elijah did, relishing the coolness as it ran down his throat, swirling his tongue around the tip of the offered finger and watching Dom's face closely as he did so. Fire flickered in those dark blue-grey pools, barely contained lust and Dom licked his bottom lip, almost as if he wasn't aware he had done it.
Dom dipped his finger back into the ice cream, and again offered his finger to Elijah, who took it greedily, drawing it fully into his mouth and sucking it hard. Dom moaned out loud and pulled it out quickly to replace it with his lips and tongue.
Warmth, moisture, need. These were the only things Elijah could think now as he had both Billy's and Dom's mouths upon him. He cried out into Dom's mouth as Billy moved in a rapidly increasing rhythm, easily arousing him to the point where he would release and then backing down slightly and drawing near painful sensations to him.
"Oh fuck Billy, please, now!" He cried out shamelessly, unable to even think anymore, only feel as Billy slowed to almost no movement whatsoever, pulling up his shaft until just the head of it was in his mouth and holding there, flicking the slit with his tongue rapidly.
"Oh fuck, oh fuck, god please, now, oh please?"
Billy pushed his head down swiftly, taking Elijah deep into his throat in one stroke, and Elijah screamed, came hard into Billy's mouth.
And woke from his dream, covered in sweat and tangled in the blankets.
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Ab fab darling!!! wonderful! could'nt have done better myself coz that ROCKED!
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Thankies.
I still can't believe I wrote it O.O
Roms
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unggg.. WOW! that part was too orgasmic :O
beautiful! thanx for posting it
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Romy B
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Thank you :)
Romy B
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Hot and cold........hehe, yes I rather like to think it was ;)
Romy B