ext_30979 ([identity profile] deleerium.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2004-02-01 12:38 am

Football - Part 7

Title: Football (Part 7)
Posted: x-posted to [livejournal.com profile] orlijah_, [livejournal.com profile] fellow_shippers, [livejournal.com profile] bloomwood_
Type: LOTR RPS AU
Author: [livejournal.com profile] deleerium
Pairing: Orlando/Elijah
Rating: R
Summary: Orlando’s the small town quarterback. Elijah’s a transfer student with football savvy. Inspiration town: http://www.lockhart-tx.org/cityhall.html
Warnings: None.
Disclaimer: None of the events portrayed in this work of fiction actually took place. None of the people in this work of fiction actually said or did any of these things. I do not own any of the characters or know any of the people mentioned in this work of fiction. This is for entertainment, people! None of it is true. (dammit…)
Notes: Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] summerfly, the world’s best beta!

For: [livejournal.com profile] mystike, Happy early Birthday!!!! ;)
[livejournal.com profile] cupidsbow, for the lovely companion ficlet
[livejournal.com profile] summerfly, because she edits 24/7… (luv u, doodle)

Read Part 7

[identity profile] goldi-babi.livejournal.com 2004-02-01 12:26 am (UTC)(link)
I've been reading this series since you posted it, and I haven't commented yet. There's absolutely no excuse for that because

You. Are. Amazing!

I can't get enough of this story! Every time a new part is posted, I stop what I'm doing and read it. Twice. So good, so good!
And this part? Yeah, what everybody else said: HOT!

By far, though, my favorite lines:

Billy and Dom turned to look at her from the front seat. “Where's Orlando?”

“He's not come...going.”
Dom snickered and whacked Billy in the arm. “Told you he was still there.”

“Shut up.” Billy turned in the seat so he could talk to Buffy as Dom pulled the pickup out of the drive. “So, was Elijah still there?”

Buffy's laugh was high-pitched. “Yeah. Wait, how did you...”

Billy cackled and leaned over the seat. “Ohmygod were they naked? Please say they were naked...”


Wonderful!