Newbie post + fic (Orli's New Pet)

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Hey all, I'm a newbie ^^ This is just something I wrote on a whim, I'm a pretty new writter so any criticism would be lovely.

Title: Orli's New Pet 1/1
Author: Bloody Raine
Characters: Orlando Bloom, Karl Urban
Rating: pg
Summary: Orlando wants a pet
Feedback: please?
Disclaimer: Dammit, I dont know them!
Notes: Thanks to my lovely beta Kuria Dalmatia

Orli's New Pet