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fellowshippers2003-11-29 12:27 am
lulla-belle1208.livejournal.com) wrote in fellowshippers2003-11-29 12:27 am
New here, posting my latest fic O_O
Title: The end of the hobbitsnorli
Rating: R
Warnings: DEATHFIC
Pairing: Domlij, Domorli
AN: written for![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
sheselectric who requested "something sad"
“What did you say?”
“I said ‘I don’t love you’.”
“But...last night...you...you...”
“I was fucking drunk, Elijah.”
“No...you weren’t...”
“Elijah, would you stop being bloody daft? I was drunk, I don’t love you.”
“We’ve been together four years!”
“Yeah, I know. It was because I couldn’t be with who I wanted, you know that. You’ve known that.”
“NO!! YOU LOVE ME!”
“Elijah! Snap out of it! I don’t love you.”
“So what, you’ve wasted four years of my life and now that...that...that fucking asshole is available you’re going to leave me?”
“Elijah... He’s not an asshole!”
“Yes he is! He blew you off for someone else! A girl and now that he wants to ‘experiment’ you’re going to leave me?”
“He didn’t blow me off! He was confused!”
“Why are you doing this to me? Why?”
“Elijah! You KNEW. You fucking knew you were nothing more than a replacement for Orlando. You fucking knew the whole time.”
“Then why did you stay with me so long?”
“Don’t go there Elijah...”
“Tell me!”
“Elijah, don’t fuckin’ push me.”
“Tell me you stupid sod. Fucking tell me!”
“Stop pushing me Elijah!”
“I thought you loved me! If you ever even thought you loved me, tell me why you stayed!”
“BECAUSE YOU WERE CONVENIENT!”
“...”
“...”
“Convenient?”
“Yes. You were accessible. You were there. You were like a fuckin’ loyal puppy dog!”
“I...I...”
“Oh, Elijah, stop acting like you didn’t know!”
“Don’t go...”
“I have to. Orlando’s waiting.”
Elijah slumped on the floor, heard the door slam and started to sob. He sat there for hours before he finally crawled into his bedroom and found the gun he kept there. He stared at it. He murmured, “Dom...” and put the barrel to his head and pulled the trigger.
Two Days Later
“ELIJAH!”
“Fuck, Dom...”
Orlando was puking. Dominic was crying. Billy was staring. Sean was calling 9-1-1.
“Elijah...Elijah...wake up...”
“Come on, he’s dead, come on...”
“No, he can’t be! Billy! He can’t be!”
But Elijah was dead.
Rating: R
Warnings: DEATHFIC
Pairing: Domlij, Domorli
AN: written for
sheselectric who requested "something sad"“What did you say?”
“I said ‘I don’t love you’.”
“But...last night...you...you...”
“I was fucking drunk, Elijah.”
“No...you weren’t...”
“Elijah, would you stop being bloody daft? I was drunk, I don’t love you.”
“We’ve been together four years!”
“Yeah, I know. It was because I couldn’t be with who I wanted, you know that. You’ve known that.”
“NO!! YOU LOVE ME!”
“Elijah! Snap out of it! I don’t love you.”
“So what, you’ve wasted four years of my life and now that...that...that fucking asshole is available you’re going to leave me?”
“Elijah... He’s not an asshole!”
“Yes he is! He blew you off for someone else! A girl and now that he wants to ‘experiment’ you’re going to leave me?”
“He didn’t blow me off! He was confused!”
“Why are you doing this to me? Why?”
“Elijah! You KNEW. You fucking knew you were nothing more than a replacement for Orlando. You fucking knew the whole time.”
“Then why did you stay with me so long?”
“Don’t go there Elijah...”
“Tell me!”
“Elijah, don’t fuckin’ push me.”
“Tell me you stupid sod. Fucking tell me!”
“Stop pushing me Elijah!”
“I thought you loved me! If you ever even thought you loved me, tell me why you stayed!”
“BECAUSE YOU WERE CONVENIENT!”
“...”
“...”
“Convenient?”
“Yes. You were accessible. You were there. You were like a fuckin’ loyal puppy dog!”
“I...I...”
“Oh, Elijah, stop acting like you didn’t know!”
“Don’t go...”
“I have to. Orlando’s waiting.”
Elijah slumped on the floor, heard the door slam and started to sob. He sat there for hours before he finally crawled into his bedroom and found the gun he kept there. He stared at it. He murmured, “Dom...” and put the barrel to his head and pulled the trigger.
Two Days Later
“ELIJAH!”
“Fuck, Dom...”
Orlando was puking. Dominic was crying. Billy was staring. Sean was calling 9-1-1.
“Elijah...Elijah...wake up...”
“Come on, he’s dead, come on...”
“No, he can’t be! Billy! He can’t be!”
But Elijah was dead.
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meep, thank you dear. <33 :)
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*gathers self back up some*
That was really good. I love the way you conveyed sooooo much with almost only dialogue.
“NO!! YOU LOVE ME!” That hit me hard.
“Don’t go...” From hysterical to just broken...makes me want to hug him a lot.
Orlando was puking. Dominic was crying. Billy was staring. Sean was calling 9-1-1. The picture is clear in my mind, and it hurts. But very characteristic of each of them.
After this, I don't think I can go read the fluffy stuff I was going to. I'm going to have to sit for a while with some quiet music. Thank you for this though; I love the hard and sad stuff, but no one was writing it for a while. Now it's back. *hugs you*
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i'm usually verreh long winded, so this was...verreh different for me, but it turned out for the better :D
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eep.
Lovely fic by the way..captures that Elijah-fragility beautifully
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