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emiloy.livejournal.com) wrote in fellowshippers2003-09-04 09:07 pm
Hi
Hi there! I'm a new member of this community! Yay! and I'd like to post one of my Billy/Dom fics... Hope you like (I'm not very good at introducing myself) I've only been a slash writer for a little while now, so be kind...
Here it is:
The evil carrot
Pairing: Billy/Dom
Disclaimer: none of this ever happened, I don't own either of the caracters *sniff*
Rating: a R maybe...
The Evil Carrot
Billy and Dom had been living together for a few months now, and the house was getting cluttered, so Dom and Billy were going to do some spring-cleaning. Billy was going to do the house, and Dom was going to empty the attic.
As Dom was going through boxes of odds and ends, something shiny caught his eye. He reached over to it. It, whatever it was, was firmly wedged between two other boxes. It gave way, and Dom fell to the floor with a crash.
“Dom? You OK?” came a call from downstairs.
“Yeah. I’m fine Billy. Something got stuck, that’s all.”
“Splinter?”
“Very funny...” Dom got back to the object he had pulled out. It was a gold-plated carrot. “Weird” Dom thought, “Never seen that before” It was rather dusty, so he blew on it. He saw something glitter. He blew again. Again with the glittering. He got up and pushed a few boxes aside and an old drum of Billy’s, and got to a fan. He turned it on and placed the carrot in front of it. Words appeared:
“This here carrot is a magic carrot. It grants the holder one wish…”
“Oh cool” Dom thought and didn’t see the rest of the text. Only the last line “To wish, place this carrot under your clothing, think hard, and voilà!”
All of a sudden, so many wishes went though his head, and then, a really good one. To be invisible! He could play a prank or two on Billy then come back to normal.
Dom quickly picked the carrot up and dropped it down his pants. “Think invisible thoughts!” he was saying to himself. He opened his eyes again. He didn’t feel different. The carrot fell with a clunk to the floor. “How’d that fall out?”
He went to a mirror, walking, without realizing it, through a few boxes. He wasn’t there. “Cool!”
He ran down the ladder to look for Billy. He had to play a prank on him.
“Billy!” He called, “Billy?” but no answer. “Oh well, must of gone out.”
He walked through a door to his room. Wait, he walked THROUGH a door. That seems wrong. Invisible people should bump into things, shouldn’t they?
He heard a noise behind him. The door opened and Billy came in with the vacuum cleaner. “Sheit, what a mess.”
“Sorry Billy” Dom said, forgetting he was invisible and feeling sorry for Billy. The face he was pulling was so sad. “I’ll do that for you.” He reached over for the vacuum, but his hand went right through it. “Oh yeah, I’m invisible. But why can’t I pick up things??” he thought. He saw Billy leaving. “Billy wait!” Billy didn’t hear him.
“Now where has Dom gotten to? He should be done by now.” Billy walked over to the ladder. “Dom?” No reply. “Must have gone out.”
“But I haven’t, I’m not, I’m here!!” Dom was standing right in front of Billy. But Billy didn’t see him. This invisibility thing didn’t work right. It went all wrong. He wasn’t just invisible, but immaterial and inaudible. He didn’t like it. Then Billy walked through him.
Everything went slow motion.
He felt Billy go through him. He felt everything about Billy. His every thought, his every movement, everything! Even…
“Ohh. What was that?” Billy gave a huge sigh of happiness. “Oh that was good.” He took hold of himself. “But how?” He looked around. No one there. He couldn’t have an orgasm for no reason, could he? Especially not such a good one. Then it occurred to him, Dom. He had felt him all around him, but only for a split second.
But for that second, all he was, was Dom. He was linked to Dom. He just didn’t know how.
That feeling had surprised them both, especially Billy, because for him, it came out of nowhere. Billy took a step back and felt it all over again. Somehow Dom got into him.
“Dom? Billy called out.
“You don’t need to shout. I’m right in front of you.” Dom replied slightly miffed.
Then Billy and Dom both put their hands in front of them and went a bit through each other. It was as if Billy could see Dom. They mind-melded. Billy and Dom sighed happily.
“Dom…” Billy thought
“Yes Billy?”
“How is this happening?”
“I have no idea, but it feels good.”
“Mmm”
“Billy?”
“Yes what?”
“Don’t leave me.”
“I won’t”
If someone had entered the hall at that moment, it would have been a weird sight to see; Billy holding the air in front of him, with his eyes shut, a slight breeze in his hair.
“Dom?”
“Yeah?”
“Where did you go?”
“No where.”
“I mean to disappear.”
“Oh. Magic carrot, attic.”
“Oh” Billy said, not really understanding. “I want you back the way you were before.”
“Me too. But it’s only one wish per person.”
“I promise I’ll wish for you to come back.”
“Go…”
“Will you be OK?”
“Yeah. I’ll float up to meet you.”
Billy broke their connection and walked to the ladder and climbed up it. He saw the carrot in the middle of the floor, picked it up, and looked at it. He felt a cold breeze on his shoulder. Dom had returned.
“Go on.” Dom thought to him.
Billy put it down his pants, shut his eyes really tightly and thought. Thought really hard about Dom, the visible, touchable Dom. He squinted really hard and pictured every single Domable detail. From his chest, to his little mole on his neck, to his pubic hairs. Every detail that he could think of. Dom was just hoping that it would work. Billy opened his eyes. Dom was standing in front of him with his fingers crossed. “Dom!” Billy said happily and jumped on him.
“I’m back!” Dom said kissing Billy, with Billy kissing back.
After a few minutes, Billy got control of himself again. “Your room’s a mess.”
“I’ll do it.” Dom went down the ladder, smiling, and Billy followed closely behind. The carrot disintegrated and the dust blew itself into a corner of the attic, waiting patiently for its next victim.
End!
Here it is:
The evil carrot
Pairing: Billy/Dom
Disclaimer: none of this ever happened, I don't own either of the caracters *sniff*
Rating: a R maybe...
The Evil Carrot
Billy and Dom had been living together for a few months now, and the house was getting cluttered, so Dom and Billy were going to do some spring-cleaning. Billy was going to do the house, and Dom was going to empty the attic.
As Dom was going through boxes of odds and ends, something shiny caught his eye. He reached over to it. It, whatever it was, was firmly wedged between two other boxes. It gave way, and Dom fell to the floor with a crash.
“Dom? You OK?” came a call from downstairs.
“Yeah. I’m fine Billy. Something got stuck, that’s all.”
“Splinter?”
“Very funny...” Dom got back to the object he had pulled out. It was a gold-plated carrot. “Weird” Dom thought, “Never seen that before” It was rather dusty, so he blew on it. He saw something glitter. He blew again. Again with the glittering. He got up and pushed a few boxes aside and an old drum of Billy’s, and got to a fan. He turned it on and placed the carrot in front of it. Words appeared:
“This here carrot is a magic carrot. It grants the holder one wish…”
“Oh cool” Dom thought and didn’t see the rest of the text. Only the last line “To wish, place this carrot under your clothing, think hard, and voilà!”
All of a sudden, so many wishes went though his head, and then, a really good one. To be invisible! He could play a prank or two on Billy then come back to normal.
Dom quickly picked the carrot up and dropped it down his pants. “Think invisible thoughts!” he was saying to himself. He opened his eyes again. He didn’t feel different. The carrot fell with a clunk to the floor. “How’d that fall out?”
He went to a mirror, walking, without realizing it, through a few boxes. He wasn’t there. “Cool!”
He ran down the ladder to look for Billy. He had to play a prank on him.
“Billy!” He called, “Billy?” but no answer. “Oh well, must of gone out.”
He walked through a door to his room. Wait, he walked THROUGH a door. That seems wrong. Invisible people should bump into things, shouldn’t they?
He heard a noise behind him. The door opened and Billy came in with the vacuum cleaner. “Sheit, what a mess.”
“Sorry Billy” Dom said, forgetting he was invisible and feeling sorry for Billy. The face he was pulling was so sad. “I’ll do that for you.” He reached over for the vacuum, but his hand went right through it. “Oh yeah, I’m invisible. But why can’t I pick up things??” he thought. He saw Billy leaving. “Billy wait!” Billy didn’t hear him.
“Now where has Dom gotten to? He should be done by now.” Billy walked over to the ladder. “Dom?” No reply. “Must have gone out.”
“But I haven’t, I’m not, I’m here!!” Dom was standing right in front of Billy. But Billy didn’t see him. This invisibility thing didn’t work right. It went all wrong. He wasn’t just invisible, but immaterial and inaudible. He didn’t like it. Then Billy walked through him.
Everything went slow motion.
He felt Billy go through him. He felt everything about Billy. His every thought, his every movement, everything! Even…
“Ohh. What was that?” Billy gave a huge sigh of happiness. “Oh that was good.” He took hold of himself. “But how?” He looked around. No one there. He couldn’t have an orgasm for no reason, could he? Especially not such a good one. Then it occurred to him, Dom. He had felt him all around him, but only for a split second.
But for that second, all he was, was Dom. He was linked to Dom. He just didn’t know how.
That feeling had surprised them both, especially Billy, because for him, it came out of nowhere. Billy took a step back and felt it all over again. Somehow Dom got into him.
“Dom? Billy called out.
“You don’t need to shout. I’m right in front of you.” Dom replied slightly miffed.
Then Billy and Dom both put their hands in front of them and went a bit through each other. It was as if Billy could see Dom. They mind-melded. Billy and Dom sighed happily.
“Dom…” Billy thought
“Yes Billy?”
“How is this happening?”
“I have no idea, but it feels good.”
“Mmm”
“Billy?”
“Yes what?”
“Don’t leave me.”
“I won’t”
If someone had entered the hall at that moment, it would have been a weird sight to see; Billy holding the air in front of him, with his eyes shut, a slight breeze in his hair.
“Dom?”
“Yeah?”
“Where did you go?”
“No where.”
“I mean to disappear.”
“Oh. Magic carrot, attic.”
“Oh” Billy said, not really understanding. “I want you back the way you were before.”
“Me too. But it’s only one wish per person.”
“I promise I’ll wish for you to come back.”
“Go…”
“Will you be OK?”
“Yeah. I’ll float up to meet you.”
Billy broke their connection and walked to the ladder and climbed up it. He saw the carrot in the middle of the floor, picked it up, and looked at it. He felt a cold breeze on his shoulder. Dom had returned.
“Go on.” Dom thought to him.
Billy put it down his pants, shut his eyes really tightly and thought. Thought really hard about Dom, the visible, touchable Dom. He squinted really hard and pictured every single Domable detail. From his chest, to his little mole on his neck, to his pubic hairs. Every detail that he could think of. Dom was just hoping that it would work. Billy opened his eyes. Dom was standing in front of him with his fingers crossed. “Dom!” Billy said happily and jumped on him.
“I’m back!” Dom said kissing Billy, with Billy kissing back.
After a few minutes, Billy got control of himself again. “Your room’s a mess.”
“I’ll do it.” Dom went down the ladder, smiling, and Billy followed closely behind. The carrot disintegrated and the dust blew itself into a corner of the attic, waiting patiently for its next victim.
End!