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[valiantfan.livejournal.com]

Here is what I am told is called a double dribble (drubble)- a dribble being a ficlet of ten lines with word counts from ten to one, a double dribble (drubble)going back up again from one to ten.

It's a Dom/Elijah, is total fiction, and needs a little warning because I got more morbid than I meant to.

Beautiful

First time I saw you I thought you were beautiful.
Next time I asked if I could kiss you.
You giggled, shrugged your shoulders and turned away.
I laughed too. Wasn’t I the joker?
Later I saw you with her.
You looked right together, somehow.
I wrote a note.
It just said,
‘I love
you.’

You
looked up.
Smiled at me.
‘Why didn’t you say?’
you asked, and kissed me.
Later, you asked me to stay.
In the morning, I got up early,
Made some coffee, stroked your cheek, and went.
It was easier, somehow, leaving the blue eyes closed.
Last time I saw you I thought you were beautiful.

Comments

[ismenin.livejournal.com]

Really lovely, my dear. I'm glad my invention has spawned so many lovely thoughts. That was definitely one of them. Hugs ya tight.

[valiantfan.livejournal.com]

Ah, it was you who started it! I was away for a few days and spotted one when I got back. I thought it sounded interesting. thanks for inventing it- I like writing to set forms! I'm glad you liked it.

[doodle-lover.livejournal.com]

*heart hurts*

*loves you*

[valiantfan.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Indeed! So beautiful! Thank you for sharing!

[valiantfan.livejournal.com]

You are very kind!