ext_56771 ([identity profile] valiantfan.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2005-10-15 05:43 pm

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Here is a little Elijah/Dom drabble. I wrote it for the [livejournal.com profile] lotrpschallenge but didn't get to post it.
(You had to write 5 paragraphs with 50, 40, 30,20 and 10 words, and make some reference to a picture of wooden seats with shafts of light falling accross them.)


Title: -I Told You
Author: - Valiantfan
Pairing: - Elijah and Dominic
Rating: - NC17
Warnings: - None.
Disclaimer: - Total fiction
Summary: - A first time, angsty kind of thing.

I told you I wasn’t ready but you took no notice. You just leaned in and you kissed me and I tried to resist, I did, I really did, but you were bigger than me. Ok, maybe just a half inch or so taller, but that makes a difference, dude!

I told you that those wooden seats were hard, and they really were, you know? But you said you loved the way the sunlight fell across my face and chest and ass and - hey! when did I lose my pants?

I told you I didn’t go all the way, but I said it very quietly and you already had your fingers inside. Do you always have lube in your pockets?

I told you not to fuck me but you pushed in and it hurt a bit, but it was awesome!

I begged you to stay but you left me anyway.

[identity profile] anyothergirl415.livejournal.com 2005-10-16 04:12 am (UTC)(link)
omg that was sad! The last line like... killed me!! Thanks for sharing!!