ext_198789 ([identity profile] doodle-lover.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2005-10-10 03:10 pm

Fic: Haunted 1/1

Title: Haunted
Author: [livejournal.com profile] doodle_lover
Beta: The amazing [livejournal.com profile] often_adamanta
Pairing: Monaboyd, and a secret!
Rating: PG-13?? It's pretty tame...
Feedback: Yes, please!!! It's the oxygen I need to breath...
Warnings: Nada
Disclaimer: As Sam put it...Fickity-fic-fic...in other words...so not true.
Summary: Just a short something I wrote one day...Elijah feels haunted.



Billy’s hand slid up Elijah’s neck, and Dominic’s arm wound around his waist. Slowly, supporting him, they led him back to Billy’s car. Silently, they got in, Elijah sprawled across the back seat, and Billy drove away from the grave, winding his way through the cemetery. Dom glanced into the rearview mirror, eyebrows raised, “Are you ok?”

Elijah sighed. “It’s been a year. It’s just not getting any easier.” He turned and looked out of his window, watched the red, yellow, orange leaves float down to the ground.

Billy and Dom shared a knowing look.

“You know he loved you more than anything, right? All he wanted from life was to spend his with you.” Billy said, quietly.

Elijah’s sorrow-eyes turned to him. “I know, Bills. I just wish he was still here.”

“We all do, Doodle. We all miss him.” Billy whispered.

“He was a wonderful person, so amazing. He loved everyone. Everyone loved him.” Dom added.

“And he knew how much you loved him. He knew, Elijah.” Billy said, staring at Elijah in the mirror.

“And he still knows.” Orlando whispered, silent words ghosting across Elijah’s cheek, a soft caress.

And Elijah smiled.

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[identity profile] blue-emotion.livejournal.com 2005-10-10 08:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww. That was so sweet. That last part was really moving :) Loved it.

[identity profile] talesinbloom.livejournal.com 2005-10-10 08:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww..sweet and sad and just the perfect thing so close to Halloween.

*loves*

[identity profile] talesinbloom.livejournal.com 2005-10-10 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
*embarrassed smooshes*

oh there is absolutely no reason to be dying over me omg

*promptly smothers with snogging*

oops! ;)

[identity profile] jira-rd.livejournal.com 2005-10-10 08:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Very lovely. I like it.

[identity profile] often-adamanta.livejournal.com 2005-10-10 09:32 pm (UTC)(link)
very nice, doodle. I like that it's shorter. It's more intense, which is what you need in a haunting.

*loves you big time*

more, yeah?

[identity profile] archerlass.livejournal.com 2005-10-10 10:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I got a shiver AND goosebumps from that one. Very nice!

[identity profile] loki-girl.livejournal.com 2005-10-10 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
*hear breaks*

[identity profile] anyothergirl415.livejournal.com 2005-10-11 02:46 am (UTC)(link)
awwwwwwwwwwww *teh love* That's so... sweet and bitter and beautiful!! *hugs* Brilliant work. Simply brilliant.

[identity profile] valiantfan.livejournal.com 2005-10-11 09:20 am (UTC)(link)
OOh! Scary! Don't frighten me like this! (I will have nightmares now - life is so fragile!)

[identity profile] luvnorli.livejournal.com 2005-10-11 12:52 pm (UTC)(link)
*sniffles* Sad and sweet. *huggles you and the fic*