drabble

[anesthezea.livejournal.com]

Title: Textures
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Billy/Dom
Summary: Just a 100 word drabble.
Archive: Ask, please.
Author's Note: This is my first bit of writing in years and very, very much not true. Please, be gentle.


Textures

There were times when Dom enjoyed textures, when he'd trace his hand over a surface and take simple delight in the feel of it against his skin. There were times when this innocent action was enough, when the sweetness made him content, happy.

But there were other times, reckless, when brushing the surface was too tame. Exploring the outter layer brought only greater need to delve deeper, push harder, tighten his grip, absorb it into his skin, his mind, urgent and powerful. There were times when he needed a darker, more painful pleasure.

There were times when he needed Billy.

--- fin ---

Comments

[thepsychicclam.livejournal.com]

This was very nice! I really enjoyed it.

Just one note. You spelled absorb wrong. You have it obsorb :)

[anesthezea.livejournal.com]

will fix. thanks. was agonizing over sending this and missed it. i must have written and rewritten the stupid things a hundred times. kept coming out at 101 words. but thanks for liking it. i needed that. this was hard for me to do. will stop rambling now. ta!

[thepsychicclam.livejournal.com]

when i write drabbles, i always end up at like "132" or something and it drives me INSANE! so i understand your pain :)

[beizy.livejournal.com]

Oooh. This was beautiful. Very powerful use of the last line. :)

[anesthezea.livejournal.com]

thanks!

[scattergold.livejournal.com]

Ooh, nice.

This would be interesting as a full-fledged fic, too. Lots of stuff to explore.

[anesthezea.livejournal.com]

this is the absolute first thing i've written in a very long time so i thought i'd start off again with something short and simple. i do think it is just a small glimpse at what could be a longer piece if i just had the courage to write it.

[scattergold.livejournal.com]

*nod*

Short and simple is always good. And this was lovely.

[kiltsandlollies.livejournal.com]

There were times when he needed a darker, more painful pleasure.

There were times when he needed Billy.

Rar. This was gorgeous. Felt like the whole story was on a dimmer switch, and the end, we're plunged into darkness. This is a very good thing. I loved it.

[anesthezea.livejournal.com]

thank you :) i'm forcing myself to get back to writing and boy, i had a time of it yesterday with this thing. after three years of staunchly avoiding writing anything other than journal entries and my shopping list, those 100 words were a terror to set down. but i'm awfully proud of myself, regardless. it will be easier next time, i hope.

[domhobbitzes.livejournal.com]

There were times when he needed Billy.

Beautiful. :)

[anesthezea.livejournal.com]

thank you. ::grin:: i hate to say it, but i've become a feedback junkie. will have to write more to get my next fix. lol.