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Happy Birthday, Part 7

Author: waqaychay
Pairing: the fellowship - jrd + david + karl = fun for all
Rating: oh so nc-17
Disclaimer: i don't know any of these people and make no claims about their personal sexual lives. this is all fiction.
Summary: Elijah has the happiest birthday ever.
Warning: gangbang, graphic sex
A/N: other parts here: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6.

Ten men held their breath.

Sean pushed forward gently, tentatively. Elijah winced as the cockhead slipped inside. Sean was larger than Ian, much larger, and Elijah was already sore from the first fuck.

There were oohs and aahs from the spectators. Viggo got a good shot of Sean pushing his cock deep into Elijah's ass. David wiped away the tears that formed and fell down Elijah's face.

Sean gripped the slim hips in front of him as Elijah tried to move forward and away from the huge dick filling him. "Nuh-uh, baby," Sean crooned. "You're not going anywhere." He shoved in the rest of the way and Elijah whimpered.

"Fuck," Bean breathed. "Don't hurt him, mate. Leave some for me."

Sean huffed as he rested inside Elijah. "God, he's tight."

Karl groaned. "He won't be by the time I get to have him."

"I don't know about that," Sean said. "He's really fucking tight." He grunted and started thrusting slowly.

To Elijah, it felt as if someone had shoved a baseball bat inside him and was now working it in and out of his stomach. He clenched his teeth and his fingers and wished for Sean to come. The others began to pet his sweaty back and sides and whisper encouragement to him. Bean grabbed his jaw and forced his tongue past Elijah's lips for a passionate kiss before growling, "Gonna fuck you so hard, baby-boy."

Eventually, Eliah was able to relax around Sean's dick and begin to enjoy the fucking. It helped that Sean began to hit his prostate every now and then. He grew hard, and Orlando gripped his bobbing penis and started jerking him off.

It didn't take long for Sean to get close to coming. Elijah's ass was hot and tight and wet with Ian's come. As he felt himself begin to climax, he reached under Elijah's chest and drew the younger man up onto his knees. He held him tight to his chest, thrusting forcefully and kissing Elijah's neck as he came, groaning out, "Baby, baby."

Orlando let go of Elijah's cock, leaving it hard and weeping. Sean let go of Elijah and gently pulled out. Elijah winced and fell to the floor. Vigo got a close-up of Sean's softening cock and Elijah's stretched asshole, both of which were dripping with come.

Bean pushed Sean out from between Elijah's spread thighs. "My turn," he grunted and mounted the birthday boy.

"God, yeah," Orlando whispered, eyes glued to Bean's cock. "Fuck him hard."

Bean grinned wolfishly. "Oh, I intend to."

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GUH! I just re-read the whole thing again... all I can say is wow 0_0
Love this series!!

yay! thank you! *love*

So I have to say that I read the whole 7 chapters in a go, and that my brain short-circuited several times along the process. Considering that Ian and Sean Austin are NOT my cup of tea for reading, this makes your fic quite special.

I'm loving it, probably even more because those "touches" of reality you added, like the fact of Elijah saying "it's enough of coming in my mouth", for example.

Yet... if you don't mind me being a little bit critical, this last chapter with Elijah all tired and all, even it's hot as hell... it starts to feel a little bit like it's REALLY enough. I know you don't mean to feel it like that (or maybe you do?) but well... a little bit of Elijah-wanting-really-more would help to put the reader at ease ;)

Please don't take offense at my comment. I don't pretend to, just help :)

I really like this one. Yup.

it starts to feel a little bit like it's REALLY enough

actually, that's what i was going for. the next parts aren't going to be gang-bang, so much as full blown orgy. poor tired elijah's had enough, i think. and i feel like writing more monaboyd lovin'. ;D

thanks for reading and commenting! it's good to know people are still reading this and liking it.

I'm reading it and I'm liking it. But yeah. If I'm going to read a non-con, I just want to know (i will read it probably, too), but well. You know what I mean ;)

yeah, i know what you mean. but don't worry. this definitely won't be a non-con.

Ok :)

Then go, post more!!!! :)