Curious Kitten 3

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Title: Curious Kitten
Author: Tri_echo sayious@earthlink.net
Pairing: Orlando/Sean, Viggo/Elijah, Dominic/Karl, Billy/David
Rating: Over all nc-17 but this chapter is R
Summary: Some of Orlando's friends have been keeping secrets from him and Orlando is determined to find out what it is. But once it does it opens the doors to secrets he didn't know he was keeping from himself.
Warning: This story will contain serious kink, d/s master/slave kind of issues. But this chapter doesn't have any except maybe some bad words. It will mention Kate and she does make an appearance but no het. This chapter does end with a bit of non con but no rape.
Disclaimer: I own no one.
Author's Notes: This story will be taking a bit of a darker turn then I thought but none of the characters in the story will be bad or anything. Just make sure you read the warnings K? Feedback is wanted.

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[kinkthatwinked.livejournal.com]

I just finished reading the story. No feedback I provide at this point will be appropriate, as my head is spinning with thoughts of how the next chapter will go.

I knew there'd be group sex and I knew there'd be S&M, but the image of Viggo in a pair of leather pants and nothing else short-circuited my brain.

And the idea of Elijah as his slave ... or Dom as Karl's, not even speaking without permission ... and not quite knowing yet which roles Billy and David play ... and realizing now the role Orlando has already been designated for with Bean ... Jesus. That was just the kind of twist to this 'secret club' that your story needed, and I didn't even realize it till I read it!

It's totally understandable why they kept this from him. Yet I also understand why Orlando got upset, thanks to your character development on him. He did seem a little spoiled before you went into how lonely he must feel; I'm glad you did that.

So the next chapter's coming when, exactly?

[tri-echo.livejournal.com]

I like Viggo in leather pants too. It's almost out of character and yet you can so see it. I wanted to kind of give hints with the way they were acting you know to show Orlando's confusion about the situation. I'm glad you like the character development, I'm big on my character and since some of the story is told from his side I though maybe we should get inside his mind. About the next chapter, I hope in a couple of days. Sorry :( But thanks for the indepth feed back I love it.