ext_57559 ([identity profile] callmerayray.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2005-01-10 05:40 am

That Boy

Title: That Boy
Author: Meagan
Pairing: Viggo/Orlando
Rating: PG
Summary: He thought we could still be friends. I hated him for that.
Warnings: Angst. Muchly.
Disclaimer: Yeah, no. Duh.

First slash story I've ever finished. But please, don't let that put you off.

What had happened to the boy he knew?

- Meagan

[identity profile] pippins-penny.livejournal.com 2005-01-10 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
That was so sad and sweet. Well done!

[identity profile] sapphiellie.livejournal.com 2005-01-10 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh that's so heart-wrenching, it hurts!! But it was gorgeous none the less. Lovely xxx <3

[identity profile] causette.livejournal.com 2005-01-10 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
wow, that was just wonderful! Very sad but also very beautiful :)

[identity profile] ios-pillow-book.livejournal.com 2005-01-10 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Wheeeee - your first fic? I hope many will follow. Love the bittersweetness of this story and the calm, matter-of-fact tone in which you tell this tale, adds much to the angst.

And I watched the innocence I loved slowly slip away. Each movie, each premiere, each photo taken by a man hidden in the bushes, stole away the boy I had loved and replaced him with the man I didn’t know.

He found a new love and I hated her. And he found new friends and gushed about them in interviews like he used to about me. I hated them too.


Such precise observations and, sadly, so true *SIGH* And I'm wondering, can you read my mind? Because that's exactly (http://www.livejournal.com/users/ios_pillow_book/237954.html) what I thought. But you've put it into words beautifully.

[identity profile] first-kiss.livejournal.com 2005-01-14 01:11 am (UTC)(link)
LOVE YOUR ICON.

LOVE THE FIC. Sad, but good.