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fellowshippers2003-06-25 04:59 pm
comet91.livejournal.com) wrote in fellowshippers2003-06-25 04:59 pm
At last!!!!!
For some reason i have been having a lot of trouble writing lately! Finally i managed to write this, it is not very long but hopefully it will get me back in the swing of writing again!!! Comments and criticisms would be much appreciated as at the moment i am not able to judge my work objectively due to the fact that i just want to be able to write something!!!!!
Title: A cinematic experience (part 1)
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Viggo/Orlando
Summary: Watching a film isn't all that Viggo has planned!
Disclaimer: This is all lies, i do not know these people!
Dedication: For![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
larian, i promised you this story ages ago! Sorry it took so long! Thanks for the X2 discs!
Warnings: This is not beta'd!
Feedback: Would be much appreciated *down on knees begging!*
Viggo sighed to himself as he looked at the pouting lower lip. He knew that it was an almost forgone conclusion that he was going to give in but his pride wouldn't let him go down without a semblance of a fight.
"Orli we saw a film you wanted to see last time, it's my turn to chose and I want this one"
Still pouting Orli peeped up at Viggo and tried to keep the triumphant grin off his face; he knew that he was going to win...again! "But Vig, it's in Spanish, I won't understand what they are saying"
"It will have subtitles!"
Giving a sad sigh Orli turned to join the short queue, "I thought we were going to go watch a film not read a book" he muttered as the girl in the kiosk looked at them expectantly.
Giving an exasperated shake of his head, Viggo gave in, something he was getting used to! "Ok, we will go and see X2 but next time I get to choose!"
"Of course you can Vig" came the muffled reply as Orlando darted across to the other queue. Following more slowly Viggo swore to himself that this was going to be the last time puppy dog eyes and a pouting mouth were going to make him change his mind!
********
Settling into his seat Viggo sighed as the chatter of kids and the rustle of popcorn started to give him a headache. The cinema was packed; how he and Orli had a row of seats to themselves he would never know. Perhaps it was his scowl that was putting off anyone planning on joining them, he mused, scowling even harder when a large family looked like it was planning to enter their row.
Sighing with relief at the silence that magically fell across the cinema as the credits started to roll, Viggo leaned across Orli to grab a handful of popcorn, grunting in surprise as an elbow caught him in the solar plexuses and Orli's normally soft voiced hissed;
"Stop it Vig, I am trying to watch this".
Sitting back in surprise Viggo shook his head in amusement only to be grunting in pain 5 minutes later as Orli's elbow once more caught him in his stomach as he tried to take a sip of their drink. Leaning back rubbing his sore stomach Viggo decided he had had enough! It was time that Orli learnt that Viggo sometimes knew best and that sometimes Viggo could get what he wanted. Settleling down more comfortably Viggo decided that he would wait a little while longer until he made his move.
After about half an hour Viggo glanced across at his lover noticing that he was totally entranced by the action on the big screen, biting the tip of his tongue like he did when he was really concentrating and every time something exciting came up he lent slightly foreword. Yes...this is the perfect time thought Viggo as he began shifting in his seat, making sure that his knee brushed against Orli's thigh.
"Sit still Vig" hissed Orli in annoyance as Viggo's shifting knee caught his drink and almost sent it flying. Leaning foreword with an evil smirk Viggo whispered in Orli's ear,
"I can't! That Wolverine guy is turning me on and my jeans feel way to tight"
Spinning around so quickly that the drink almost went flying again, Orli let out a yelp "you're turned on by what?"
"Wolverine" replied Viggo trying to keep the smirk out of his voice, "it's something about that untamed violence and the sheer brashness of the guy"
"Untamed violence," gasped Orli "sheer brashness! I'll show you sheer brashness!"
With that he slid his hand up Viggo's thigh and pressed down on the bulge at the juncture. Trying to control his bodies eager response Viggo brushed Orli's hand away,
"Stop it Orli, I thought you wanted to watch the film...I am quite happy to watch Wolverine while you enjoy the film" and in a overload whisper Viggo commented to himself "I bet he'd be an animal in bed"
Wanting to laugh at Orli's outraged gasp Viggo steeled himself not to respond to another wandering hand but to his complete shock Orlando had dropped down onto the floor and before Viggo could blink he was between his legs pulling down Viggo's zip.
"Orli, what the fuck are you doing" Viggo hissed, trying to keep his voice down so that nobody would turn round and see him getting what promised to be one of the best blowjobs of his life. Clenching the armrests with whitened fingers Viggo tried not to whimper as with no warning Orli warm mouth closed around his rock hard cock, his tongue exploring the sensitive slit and running along the pulsating vain. Screwing his eye's shut Viggo tried to work out how this had all backfired on him as tremors began to run through his body as Orli swallowed him deeper and deeper. Feeling Orli reach up under his shirt to cruelly pinch a nipple, Viggo came, the waves of pleasure continuing to ebb through him as Orli licked him clean. Keeping his eye's closed Viggo sat there silently as Orli zipped him back up and returned to his seat. It wasn't until Orli leaned over to whisper in his ear "now can I watch the movie in quiet" that Viggo opened his eye's and moved, determined this time to teach Orli a lesson he wouldn't forget!
TBC
Title: A cinematic experience (part 1)
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Viggo/Orlando
Summary: Watching a film isn't all that Viggo has planned!
Disclaimer: This is all lies, i do not know these people!
Dedication: For
larian, i promised you this story ages ago! Sorry it took so long! Thanks for the X2 discs!Warnings: This is not beta'd!
Feedback: Would be much appreciated *down on knees begging!*
Viggo sighed to himself as he looked at the pouting lower lip. He knew that it was an almost forgone conclusion that he was going to give in but his pride wouldn't let him go down without a semblance of a fight.
"Orli we saw a film you wanted to see last time, it's my turn to chose and I want this one"
Still pouting Orli peeped up at Viggo and tried to keep the triumphant grin off his face; he knew that he was going to win...again! "But Vig, it's in Spanish, I won't understand what they are saying"
"It will have subtitles!"
Giving a sad sigh Orli turned to join the short queue, "I thought we were going to go watch a film not read a book" he muttered as the girl in the kiosk looked at them expectantly.
Giving an exasperated shake of his head, Viggo gave in, something he was getting used to! "Ok, we will go and see X2 but next time I get to choose!"
"Of course you can Vig" came the muffled reply as Orlando darted across to the other queue. Following more slowly Viggo swore to himself that this was going to be the last time puppy dog eyes and a pouting mouth were going to make him change his mind!
********
Settling into his seat Viggo sighed as the chatter of kids and the rustle of popcorn started to give him a headache. The cinema was packed; how he and Orli had a row of seats to themselves he would never know. Perhaps it was his scowl that was putting off anyone planning on joining them, he mused, scowling even harder when a large family looked like it was planning to enter their row.
Sighing with relief at the silence that magically fell across the cinema as the credits started to roll, Viggo leaned across Orli to grab a handful of popcorn, grunting in surprise as an elbow caught him in the solar plexuses and Orli's normally soft voiced hissed;
"Stop it Vig, I am trying to watch this".
Sitting back in surprise Viggo shook his head in amusement only to be grunting in pain 5 minutes later as Orli's elbow once more caught him in his stomach as he tried to take a sip of their drink. Leaning back rubbing his sore stomach Viggo decided he had had enough! It was time that Orli learnt that Viggo sometimes knew best and that sometimes Viggo could get what he wanted. Settleling down more comfortably Viggo decided that he would wait a little while longer until he made his move.
After about half an hour Viggo glanced across at his lover noticing that he was totally entranced by the action on the big screen, biting the tip of his tongue like he did when he was really concentrating and every time something exciting came up he lent slightly foreword. Yes...this is the perfect time thought Viggo as he began shifting in his seat, making sure that his knee brushed against Orli's thigh.
"Sit still Vig" hissed Orli in annoyance as Viggo's shifting knee caught his drink and almost sent it flying. Leaning foreword with an evil smirk Viggo whispered in Orli's ear,
"I can't! That Wolverine guy is turning me on and my jeans feel way to tight"
Spinning around so quickly that the drink almost went flying again, Orli let out a yelp "you're turned on by what?"
"Wolverine" replied Viggo trying to keep the smirk out of his voice, "it's something about that untamed violence and the sheer brashness of the guy"
"Untamed violence," gasped Orli "sheer brashness! I'll show you sheer brashness!"
With that he slid his hand up Viggo's thigh and pressed down on the bulge at the juncture. Trying to control his bodies eager response Viggo brushed Orli's hand away,
"Stop it Orli, I thought you wanted to watch the film...I am quite happy to watch Wolverine while you enjoy the film" and in a overload whisper Viggo commented to himself "I bet he'd be an animal in bed"
Wanting to laugh at Orli's outraged gasp Viggo steeled himself not to respond to another wandering hand but to his complete shock Orlando had dropped down onto the floor and before Viggo could blink he was between his legs pulling down Viggo's zip.
"Orli, what the fuck are you doing" Viggo hissed, trying to keep his voice down so that nobody would turn round and see him getting what promised to be one of the best blowjobs of his life. Clenching the armrests with whitened fingers Viggo tried not to whimper as with no warning Orli warm mouth closed around his rock hard cock, his tongue exploring the sensitive slit and running along the pulsating vain. Screwing his eye's shut Viggo tried to work out how this had all backfired on him as tremors began to run through his body as Orli swallowed him deeper and deeper. Feeling Orli reach up under his shirt to cruelly pinch a nipple, Viggo came, the waves of pleasure continuing to ebb through him as Orli licked him clean. Keeping his eye's closed Viggo sat there silently as Orli zipped him back up and returned to his seat. It wasn't until Orli leaned over to whisper in his ear "now can I watch the movie in quiet" that Viggo opened his eye's and moved, determined this time to teach Orli a lesson he wouldn't forget!
TBC
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*wriggles on her seat* I have to let my excitement out..
*screams*
There. Well. Luffly story. :)
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I love writing and thats why this writers block thing is really doing my head in but hopefully it is coming to an end and i will be able to start writing again! including the second part to this!
Thanks once again for commenting!