ext_35097 ([identity profile] the-duckie.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2004-11-04 10:23 pm

Drabble.

Stained Sheets.
PG. Drabble.
Dom & Your Choice.
Feedback requested.



Dominic was gone. He had come for a brief stay, no more than a couple of days and a solitary night. He was gone and all that was left was an impression on the pillow and stains on the sheets. No, not stains of love though those remained. Blue and black smudges, the kind that wouldn't come out in the wash. Echoes of meaningful words that had rubbed away from a night of being tucked beneath pillows and pinned under his body. Dominic was gone, but the stains would remain and linger , a memory that spoke of promises to come.

[identity profile] broksgurl717.livejournal.com 2004-11-04 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow...that was really good! Great job on this! :D
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[identity profile] nimmy.livejournal.com 2004-11-04 07:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Dom can be such a bastard ;-D *gg*

[identity profile] 24-centuries.livejournal.com 2004-11-04 09:33 pm (UTC)(link)
I really really really liked this =D

Have had this happen to me a few times and this is the first time I've seen anyone address it in fic! =D

Love it =D Thanks for sharing =D

[identity profile] darknightjess.livejournal.com 2004-11-05 04:20 am (UTC)(link)
Very good! So much in so little!!
Very vivid!!