ext_8803 ([identity profile] azrhiaz.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2004-10-04 05:59 pm

Ficlet, Before the Weight Can Leave the Air, Domlijah, PG

Title: Before the Weight Can Leave the Air
Author: Azrhiaz
Pairing: Domlijah
Rating: PG
Summary: Well, it isn't happy.
Disclaimer: Fiction, completely. Author not implying otherwise.

There's a problem, feathers iron
Bargain buildings, weights and pullies
Feathers hit the ground before the weight can leave the air
Buy the sky and sell the sky and tell the sky and tell the sky

Don't fall on me

-- R.E.M.



Before the Weight Can Leave the Air

[identity profile] v-greyson.livejournal.com 2004-10-05 06:55 pm (UTC)(link)
there's nothing safe about the way the light burns into the corners

beautiful, just like the rest of this. it made me want to wrap elijah in blankets and make him tea. that's a compliment, by the way.

also, this comment is not in your journal because i am not smart enough to figure out how to comment there. :) sorry.