An Ocean Apart part 5B

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Title

: An Ocean Apart (5B/?)

Author

: Sarah (nickelsandcoats )

Rating

: R for language and brief sexual description

Summary

: Things begin to fall apart and com together.

Disclaimer

: Made it all up. Not mine.

Beta

: the wonderful ceartas . She held my hand, revived me when I’d faint over how long this chapter was getting, was a great cheerleader, and was patient enough to wait while I took a very long time to finish this after I had started it. She also fixed all my stupid mistakes that I made when cutting and pasting all this back together after rewriting certain sections three and four times. Partial writing credit goes to her for adding a bit that I had forgotten. Finally, she told where to break this monster up so that it all made sense and wasn’t too long. I cannot thank you enough for all your help, Chelle. *snogs*

Author’s note:

This chapter by itself, running at over 7000 words, is longer than the previous four chapters combined. For ease of reading, I have broken it up into 2 parts, both of which are being posted now. Please make sure you read part A before reading part B. 

Previous parts are here.

This is part B.  Make sure you have read part A BEFORE reading this part.

I can hear you crying across the water...

Cross posted to monaboyd , fellow_shippers , and my lj.

Comments

[solangiana.livejournal.com]

That was so lovely. Coldplay+ this fic= tears and me feeling really sad and lonely.

[nickelsandcoats.livejournal.com]

*gives you tissues and a hug* Don't cry! I always feel horrible when I make people cry! I'm glad you liked it though. Thanks so much!

[feelings-fool.livejournal.com]

I read from part 1 to part 5 and just love this story! Normally, I don't like angsty stories that much, 'cause I am too much into it. This time, I can't stop myself from reading, even if I cried with Dom and Billy *cough*

I just love your description of the characters, it's obviously that you spent much thoughts in their behaviour. And I just adore the dreams they were sharing!

It's a great idea, a great realising.
Thanks for sharing it and please write more soon!!

[nickelsandcoats.livejournal.com]

Sorry it took me so long to respond- real life sucks.

Thank you so much! I tend to get a little too into their heads when I write this, and I've found myself getting choked up over it. *hands you tissues*

I'm so glad that the characters come across so well. I struggle to write Billy sometimes, he just doesn't want to talk on occasion. Thank you so much for reading!

[feelings-fool.livejournal.com]

Just ignore the other answer.... *drop* My Outlook tricked me and i thought to answer another comment..

Soo... *takes tissue thankful*
I hope that you'll write more soon, I am so much into this story *G* Really, without flattering, it's one of the best Billy-Dom-Stories I've ever read. And I SO hope that they'll come together again!

So thanks for writing it ;))

And what's that about "real life sucks"? Have you got problems at the moment?

[nickelsandcoats.livejournal.com]

No, there's no problems, I'm just really busy, which doesn't leave a whole lot of time for writing and fic reading. I work two jobs and I have a lot of classwork, so...*shrugs* Thank you for your concern though! :)

And I'm flattered. If you could see me now, I'm currently about 120000 shades of red. Thank you.