Drabble - Pulse (Viggo/Orlando, R)

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Title: Pulse
Author: Fragile
Rating: R
Pairing: Viggo/Orlando
Disclaimer: None of it's real. Not any of it.


Pulse

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Orlando is blind.

The thin, frayed cloth is drawn tightly over his eyes, making him unable to see anything other than the blackness, alternately sprinkled with sprays of white streaks of light.

*pulse*

"Oh god..."

Pulsing in time with Viggo’s thrusts which are slow, deliberate. Maddening. The intrusions measured, timed by the metronome that ticks quietly inside of Viggo's mind.

Press.

"Fuck, Vig. I need more."

A hand, solid and warm, rests in the middle of his back and though it's not enough, Orlando will accept it. Knows that in a moment, Viggo will shift and move and...

*pulse*

"yes..."


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Comments

[ladymalen.livejournal.com]

*faintthud*

[fragilebroken.livejournal.com]

I take that as a high compliment. Thank you. *smiles*

[ladymalen.livejournal.com]

It was meant as one :)

[sagralisse.livejournal.com]

oooohhhh! ::claps with delight:: Thank you!

[fragilebroken.livejournal.com]

*takes a bow* You're very welcome. ;)

[viva-gloria.livejournal.com]

This is wonderfully evocative and physical - I like it a lot.

[fragilebroken.livejournal.com]

I appreciate your feedback and I'm so glad that you like it. I had hoped that the physicality would show through as it was so prevalent in my mind when I wrote this.

I can't always tell if a drabble works or not. I can only hope. :)

[little-whittles.livejournal.com]

I loved it! It cut straight to the point and with so few words said a lot, and created this *fans self* wonderful mental image.