Slight

Title: Slight (5/?)
Rating: PG-13 (mostly for language)
Pairing: Billy/Elijah
Summary: Billy has a minor fascination with a costar. But it's nothing.
Feedback: is a many splendored thing
Notes: So, I got it in my head that I wanted to write subtlety for subtlety's sake. Reading between the lines, hidden meanings, tension (tension = drug of choice), things unsaid but there anyway, etc. I dunno if it'll float everyone's boat, but I've got to get it out.
Important: All of the poems in each chapter are by W.B. Yeats, whom I've just recently fallen in love with. Which is weird, because ordinarily I'm not the least bit moved by poetry, and god forbid I should try to write anything so poignant myself. Anyway, I take absolutely no credit at all for them, because I'm not anywhere near qualified to even pretend I came up with something that good.
A/N: I'm not fond of this chapter. There's a lot I was trying to convey here that probably isn't easy to see. But I've been chewing on it for a week, and I'm sick of it.

Chapter 5

Chapter 4
Chapter 3
Chapter 2
Chapter 1

[identity profile] yanks02.livejournal.com 2004-08-07 10:42 pm (UTC)(link)
I just now found all these tonight and I really like where you are going with this. I, too, am a huge fan of the slow build up kinda thing. I like it!