http://lotrwhore128.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lotrwhore128.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2004-07-06 01:17 pm

Umm...

Well, I think this is only like the 2nd or 3rd time that I've posted on this lovely little place. I'm just now kinda coming out of a time of great writers block.

Title: The Accident
Rating: Pg-13
Pairing: Dominic/Elijah
Feedback: Is greatly appreciated, and gives me reason to try and write more.
Warnings: A bit of swearing and implied self hurt

God it’s been a long day… Elijah thought to himself as he slowly entered the apartment that he and Dom shared together.

Elijah stepped inside and locked the door securely before he set his things down on the floor in the doorway. I’ll pick them up later…I’m sure Dom won’t care if they are there just for a minute.

Elijah walked into their living room and looked around for Dom but he was no where in sight. This is strange… Elijah thought as he walked back to the bedroom but there was still no sign of him.

Next he checked the bathrooms. Nothing. Elijah scratched his head. Where the fuck is he at?

Elijah shrugged it off and walked into the kitchen. He gasped as he found Dom. Lying on the floor blood everywhere.

Elijah dropped to his knees beside him. “Dom! Dom!”

Dom looked at him. “What? Huh…Lij?”

Tears brimmed on Elijah’s eyes as he held Dom’s head in his hands. “What happened Dommie?”

Dom looked at him. “I don’t know. I don’t know what came over me it just happened.”

“How could you?!” Elijah was furious. “I can’t believe you did something like that!”

“I didn’t mean to…it was an accident.”

“You’re so selfish! I can’t believe you! Did you even think about what effect this would have on me?”

“I got hungry so I came in here to get something to eat. My socks made me slip and I just landed. I had a hold on the fridge door and I don’t know what happened.”

“You make it sound as if you weren’t planning on this happening. How long have you been waiting to do this?” Elijah began to weep.

Dom looked at him sadly. “I didn’t know you would get this upset…”

“Why would I not?!”

“I’m sorry.” Elijah looked shocked as Dom sat up and looked at him. “I’ll buy more ketchup…I promise.”
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[identity profile] lalablue.livejournal.com 2004-07-06 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
I was getting worried. cute.

[identity profile] lalablue.livejournal.com 2004-07-06 03:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I read most things. If I can handle [livejournal.com profile] semaphore27's "Lost", "Found" and the "Entire World" series- I think I can handle most anything.

[identity profile] ex-salwood.livejournal.com 2004-07-06 03:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Heheh..... brilliant!

[identity profile] fyrefly101.livejournal.com 2004-07-07 12:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh ... that's brilliant. Just brilliant! I'm going to save that to read in the morning before work - should start the day off just right! Just too funny :)

naughty naughty

[identity profile] anajana.livejournal.com 2004-07-07 05:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Only thing I'd change would be near the top-lying on the floor "red" everywhere- not "blood"-but only if keeping up the suspense for a teeny bit more is important...what a scene-crying over spilt ketchup...
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