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ext_58031 ([identity profile] banausos.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2003-02-12 06:34 pm

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Author: Becca (Ox Jupiter xO@aol.com)
Pairing: Domlijah (EW/DM)
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimers: Don't know them. Don't own them. Not true as far as I know.
Notes: Bailey rules my world, she was also kind enough to be my beta, and give this a title. Right. It's also my first lotrips, and my first drabble. Be kind.


Elijah's vision isn't blurring around the edges, his head isn't swimming with confusion. Elijah's reason for unstable hands and fumbled kisses is not intoxication (maybe guilt? maybe nerves?). Elijah is fully aware of the burn spreading from the pit of his stomach to the insides of his thighs. Elijah knows exactly what he is doing and is determined to make the most of it--pushing back to meet every slow thrust. Elijah knows he is a good actor, knows he's carried this charade off well.

Elijah doesn't know that Dom (whose wet lips press against his ear murmuring "love you" as he comes buried deep inside of Elijah) is as good at acting drunk as he is.

[identity profile] sarahthesleuth.livejournal.com 2003-02-12 04:43 pm (UTC)(link)
oooh.

fabulous. :)

[identity profile] bellsforme.livejournal.com 2003-02-12 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
*fans self* Wow. And that wasn't even graphic. The last bit - yes. *clicks the green lj thumbs up button*
ext_16163: (domlijah angst)

[identity profile] bunniewabbit.livejournal.com 2003-02-12 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, me likes! Short, sharp and intense. Nice!

[identity profile] ex-salwood.livejournal.com 2003-02-12 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Short, intense, excellent

[identity profile] starrwisher.livejournal.com 2003-02-12 05:25 pm (UTC)(link)
No other words were necessary. Very nice!

[identity profile] kevswitchau.livejournal.com 2003-02-12 08:04 pm (UTC)(link)
*whimper*

[identity profile] samena.livejournal.com 2003-02-12 10:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Oohhh... Beautiful!! Very good!

[identity profile] cohb.livejournal.com 2003-02-13 06:54 am (UTC)(link)
lovely.

[identity profile] juweldom.livejournal.com 2003-02-13 12:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, this was a lovely little ficlet--yes, I agree; a complete little story all in its own right.

Bravo on it being your first! :D

Re: We thanks you, preciousss.

[identity profile] juweldom.livejournal.com 2003-02-13 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
hah; well the idea hit me while driving home from L.A.--was trying to think of a good birthday fic in honor of the blue-eyed bendy boy. And DomTongue is *always* good.

glad you enjoyed!

Re: We thanks you, preciousss.

[identity profile] little-whittles.livejournal.com 2003-02-13 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
I LOVE your icon!

[identity profile] little-whittles.livejournal.com 2003-02-13 11:23 pm (UTC)(link)
I thought this story was great. Short, sweet, and right to the point.

[identity profile] little-whittles.livejournal.com 2003-02-16 09:42 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!