DomBilleh drabble

[mctaggart-pegg.livejournal.com]

Author: Pippin (McTaggart_Pegg@hotmail.com)
Pairing: BB/DM
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Don't know either of them. More's the pity.
Feedback: Yes please--I'm a feedback hor. :)

Unbelievable. I wrote a drabble. I actually wrote something only 100 words long. It's some sort of freak of nature, really.



Billy accepted his pint. "Would ye look at the head on that? Work of art, that is."

"What would you know about good head?" Dom smirked, not lifting his red eyes. "Straight bloke, aren't you? So you keep insisting, anyway."

Billy's jaw clenched. He rose and left the table so abruptly he knocked the corner. His pint rocked, sloshing beer everywhere.

Orlando quickly steadied it. "Too far, Sblomie," he murmured.

"Shut up," Dom snapped.

"You're not helping your case with cracks like that," Orlando said, unoffended.

Dom stared at his glass. "I don't have a case," he muttered. "Not anymore."

Comments

[juliaabra.livejournal.com]

oh i love it. that billy as straight man struggling against his love for dommie. delish! and well done in only 100 words.

[mctaggart-pegg.livejournal.com]

Lol. Thank you very much. :)

[piratesorka.livejournal.com]

It is a drabble indeed.

Its always amazing to me how a well crafted drabble can say so much with so few words. Just like this one.

Drabbles are nice...but in your case it feels like nibbling on appetizers...you have to wonder where the main course is. Good job!

[natureofme.livejournal.com]

Ouchie! but damn good, as always. I think I love you!

[chichiria.livejournal.com]

Very lovely. Even in just a drabble you managed to show us the angst and emotions. Awesome work. :)

[mctaggart-pegg.livejournal.com]

Wow, what lovely things to say! Thank you so much, hon! :)

[mctaggart-pegg.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. :)

[mctaggart-pegg.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[http://users.livejournal.com/_riz/]

*giggles* Hooray for drabbles that are truly drabbles! Cute, too. Will Billy never learn? >_>

[mctaggart-pegg.livejournal.com]

Hee, thank you. And I think it's Dom that needs to learn something, here. ;o)

[never-pine.livejournal.com]

Oh wow. That was fantastically done. Sizzling with emotion and unspoken, and hell, unwritten feeling and detail. *applauds*

xx

[mctaggart-pegg.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank you very much indeed! I'm glad you liked it. :)