First Fic

[silver1226.livejournal.com]

I wrote my first fic ever.
i'm so excited and after I made ten people read it I decided maybe it could be posted.


Title: The Morning After
Author: Silver1226
Pairing: Read and you will find out.
Rating: PG I guess
Written for my Manda, and myself of course.



The man lying on the bed looked so content; rested, loved, covered in only a sheet,
he was a part of the picture, a beautiful sight to wake up to.

It was then that he realised that this was more than a summer fling. He woke up to go to the bathroom, uncurled him self from his little Doodle, and when he returned he was greeted by the most beautiful sight in the world,
like a ray of light breaking the clouds after forty nights of rain.
And he knew, he just knew, that he couldn't live with out his Doodle,
that nothing would make him happier than being able to wake up to this sight every day.
He could get quite used to ---

"Sblomie, come back to bed."

"Did I wake you, Doodle?"

"S'okay, come here"

He lay back down and curled up with his Elwood.

"You know Doodle, I could get -"

"So could I, Dom, so could I."

"I would like to."

"Then we shall."

The two men on the bed looked so conent: cuddling, snoring softly, arms and legs entwined,
they were two halves of a whole, two beautiful men in love.

The End.

Comments

[darknightjess.livejournal.com]

I wrote my first fic ever. Congrats - and excellent job
...I decided maybe it could be posted. good decision!!
Yay!

[silver1226.livejournal.com]

Thanks!
I'm glad you liked it.
I was really nervous, i mean i am naturally a writer but that is the first story i've ever written.
And to think I got the idea from the Grapes of Wrath and my english teacher.
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[ancabell.livejournal.com]

oooh, i really like this and i dont usualy read dom/lijah stuff. your dialogue was really great! i loved that you need to use your imagination and complete the thoughts.
great work!

[silver1226.livejournal.com]

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Thank you!
I am glad you liked it.
I'm all hyper now.
::giggles::
I was afraid wouldn't like it.
My mom said it was like romantic manga, way too sweet for her.
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[the-velvet-rope.livejournal.com]

Awww, that was very sweet. I liked it. :)

[silver1226.livejournal.com]

Thank you.
I'm glad you liked it.
It's so cool having all these people who write so many things that i've read liking one of my stories.
I can't stop smiling.

[pecos.livejournal.com]

See...that wasn't so scary after all, was it? Thank you for sharing yourself with the rest of us.

[silver1226.livejournal.com]

No, it wasn't.
Your welcome and Thank You.

Oh and i like your icon.
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[apple-scruffer.livejournal.com]

Are you sure this is only your first? Dang...*remembers writing own first fic...shudders* This is really, really good. :)

[silver1226.livejournal.com]

Thanks!
Glad I made good "first" impression
::giggls::