ext_32102 ([identity profile] mostlikelyto.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2004-03-09 11:07 pm

Shiver, Viggo/Orlando

Title: Shiver
Author: [livejournal.com profile] mostlikelyto
Pairing: Viggo/Orlando
Rating: R (-ish?)
Summary: Um, I suck at these. A pair drabbles. About Orlando and Viggo. And stuff.
Feedback: Not necessary, but would be like bananas to a monkey.


Viggo was so capable, just so fucking good at everything he did, that you thought that nothing could ever unnerve him. But the first time you had sex, Viggo's calloused hands shook as they slid slowly, lightly over your skin.

"You're shaking," you said.

"I'm not," Viggo replied, his voice breaking. His fingers trembled as they inched down your legs, pulling them apart, pushing them up, and then, oh. Then you were the one trembling.

"You are," you managed to get out, nearly choking on the words.

"So are you," Viggo said into the sensitive skin of your inner thighs.

=

Three years, and he's like a stranger to you now.

Underneath your hands, he feels the same. He's doing the same things he's always done. He's arching into your touch, making the same sounds of wanting and needing and moremoremore. But there's something about the way his hips lift off the bed, the way his head goes back when you push into him that isn't exactly the same as you remembered. You don't know what it is, what about him that makes you pause and think, "He wasn't always like this."

"You're shaking," he says, and you are.

He's not.

[identity profile] wasted-hope.livejournal.com 2004-03-09 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
wow. this really got to me...

[identity profile] sajee.livejournal.com 2004-03-09 08:47 pm (UTC)(link)
oh. wow. really good but the sting in the second one... makes me want to sob. (in a fucking amazingly well written but ohso sad kind of way.)

[identity profile] cynical-terror.livejournal.com 2004-03-10 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
Please, you definately do NOT suck. These were wonderful little drabbles, and I loved them. I especially liked the second, very stirring.

[identity profile] smithereen.livejournal.com 2004-03-10 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
ouch. I'm having a hard time figure out what to say about this other than, as short as it is, it really gets its claws into you and sticks with you. I've read it a couple times now, and I'm having trouble pin-pointing what gives it such an impact. Maybe because it's utterly believable? Maybe how tactile it is. Whatever it is...good job with that! heh heh.

Is it bad form to ask...I took the second part as Viggo POV...is that what you intended?