http://dommieluvr.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] dommieluvr.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2004-02-25 10:39 am

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Title:Imperfect Perfection
Pairing:Domlijah =D
Summary:Elijah's never been kissed
Rating: PG-ish. Use of the f-word a few times...
Warnings:Fluffy, first kiss
A/N:Not beta'd, first fic, so I apologize if you think it sucks lol..
Disclaimer:Lies, I tell you!
Feedback:PLEASE! I'd love it.

When Elijah had thought about his first kiss, he always thought about how kisses worked in movies:the handsome lead and the beautiful starlet would stand about a foot apart from each other, staring into each other's eyes. They would slowly come closer together, with music swelling, then thier lips would meet as the music came to a crescendo. The perfect moment would last until the credits rolled. That was the way Elijah had imagined it. So when he found himself standing a foot away from Dom, staring into his eyes, he was taken aback. This isn't the way it's supposed to be, Elijah thought to himself.

At the ripe old age of 19 years old, Elijah had his share of on screen kisses, with some of Hollywood's hottest actresses. He was seasoned in the art of falling in love on screen, but he hadn't yet mastered falling in love in real life. He couldn't fall in love with any of those actresses. People in Hollywood were too fake. He swore to himself he'd never fall for a Hollywood girl. Luckily for him, there were rarely any women on set for him to fall for...

How did we get here? Elijah thought to himself. Then he suddenly remembered. He had been at Dom's listening to music, when "I Want You" by Savage Garden came over the speakers. Dom looked him straight in the eyes as he sang along:

Anytime I need to see your face,
I just close my eyes
And I am taken to a place where
your crystal mind and
Magenta feelings take up shelter
in the base of my spine
Sweet like a chic-a-cherry cola
I don't need to try and explain;
I just hold on tight
And if it happens again, I might move
so slightly
To the arms and the lips and the face
of the human cannonball
That I need to, I want to


Elijah's realized that he had stopped breathing and he broke Dom's intense stare. He was looking for an excuse to get out of there. He thought quickly and proceeded to look at his watch.

"Damn, it's getting late, I gotta get goin'"

"Lij, it's midnight. This isn't late for you."

"Yeah, but I'm insanely tired. I'll see you on set tomorrow."

"Lij?"

"Yeah?"

"We have the day off tomorrow"

Shit "Well, I gotta catch up on some sleep, man."

"Lij, if you want to leave, just say you want to leave, you don't have to make up a lie to get out of here." Dom snapped.

"I'm not lying...I just...I'm just going to go home..." Elijah shuffled his feet and put his hands in his pockets. He walked over to Dom, who was now standing up. "See ya later, mate"

"I'll call you tomorrow." Dom moved in for a hug. Elijah felt uncomfortable all of a sudden. What the fuck is wrong with you? This is your best friend here. Why are you freaking out now? When they hugged, Dom kissed him on the cheek. Elijah felt his cheek burn. He broke the hug, turned, and left. When he opened the door to the outside, he saw the rain pouring down. He walked across the street to the car.

"Lij!"

Elijah turned around and through his rain soaked eyes, he saw Dom running towards him.

"Lij, wait."

"What, Dom?"

"You forgot your cell phone."

Elijah's hand brushed Dom's when his phone was passed from one hand to the other. The tips of his fingers felt the same warmth that his cheek did. Dom looked Elijah right in the eyes. They stood across from each other. Dom closed the space between them until they were about a foot apart. Elijah's heart was racing. Dom bit his bottom lip as he inched his way closer to Elijah. Elijah closed his eyes to feel Dom's mouth on his. His lips now felt the burn that his hand and cheek felt. Elijah opened his mouth slightly, wanting to deepen the kiss, but only managing to knock his teeth against Dom's.

"Jesus, fuck, I'm sorry Dom...I've never...done this before." Elijah looked down at the ground.

"And I have? How often do I go around kissing guys?" Dom retorted, smiling.

Elijah smiled. "No, I mean I've never kissed anyone before. Girls or boys."

Dom's eyes changed in a way Elijah couldn't explain. "You mean, I'm your first kiss?"

"Yeah" Elijah said sheepishly. "I just don't know what I'm doing..."

Dom stroked his face and then took his hand. "Let me show you then."

He moved in to kiss Elijah again, this time taking more control of the situation. When Elijah opened his mouth this time, Dom let his tongue slip inside Elijah's mouth. Elijah pulled back, smiling.

"What?" Dominic said, looking confused.

"Can we go inside?"

"Why?" Dom still looked flabberghasted.

"I'd rather not have these lessons in the rain."

Dom looked up and smiled. He took Elijah's hand and led him back to the house. Elijah threw out the idea of what a first kiss should be like. It shouldn't be a flourish of music and waiting for the perfect moment. It had to be with the perfect person, and Elijah had found him.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/saura_/ 2004-02-25 09:27 am (UTC)(link)
Is sweet!
But... well you know... Is a little... difficult to imagine that Elijah had never kissed before nor girls nor boys... I would have rather done it kind of just boys, or maybe even to trade something like that make some AU.
But is sweet, really... is a good job to imagine that.
I liked it.
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I'm not native english, hope I have made sense, don't mean to be rude, just to... feedback...