ext_17740 ([identity profile] m-l-h.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2004-02-06 10:23 pm

Taken (Drabble)

TITLE : Taken
AUTHOR : [livejournal.com profile] m_l_h
RATING : PG
PAIRING : Orlando / Viggo
WARNINGS : Character Death
A/N : 100 words. This drabble is somewhat of a prequel to a short fic I'm working on (coming soon I hope!)



“Do whatever you want Orlando, you always do.”

Orlando can still hear those chilling words echoing in his ears, above the screeching of brakes, above the crunching of metal, above the smashing of glass. And then it all stops. All movement in the street outside ceases; final shards of glass fall to the pavement. The heart-wrenching noise of the past few seconds, (was it minutes?) ceases, leaving an eerie, disturbing silence. Clutching his own steering wheel, his knuckles quickly go white, air caught in his lungs. Orlando can only stare at the carnage before him, the result of the collision.

[identity profile] ex-salwood.livejournal.com 2004-02-06 02:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Bloody hell fire. I want to read the rest... like right now!

[identity profile] smittenrosebud.livejournal.com 2004-02-06 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, this is amazing. That is the most perfect, realistic description of a car crash I have ever read. *is in awe* I'm eagerly awaiting more :)

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[identity profile] smittenrosebud.livejournal.com 2004-02-06 03:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :)

Yours is hilarious! (I just spit coffee all over my computer screen)