Drabble

[domslover.livejournal.com]

Author – Me
Title – Whole
Pairing – Monaboyd
Rating – NC17 Baby
Summary – 112 word drabble. If I can count!!!!
Disclaimers – I don’t own them I only wish I did. ‘A vague disclaimer is nobody’s friend.’ (Willow – Buffy)
Feedback – Please Please Please I live for the stuff, give me oxygen.



Dom doesn’t think he can stand it; Billy pushing inside him, filling him. Dom always feels empty when Billy’s not in him. But at this moment he is and Dom feels complete.

Billy thrusting in and out, slamming him hard into the mattress. Dom’s legs wrapped round his back, pulling him closer. Dom’s own cock trapped between their bodies, just enough friction to hold him in ecstasy. Billy breathing his name over and over again in his ear, ‘Dommie, Dommie’ like a chant.

One last thrust and they’re both spilling over, clutching at each other. ‘God love you Billy’ and Billy kisses him. ‘Love you too Dom’ and Dom feels so whole.

Comments

[flumsan.livejournal.com]

Yum.

[yes, 112 word. I counted!]

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[domslover.livejournal.com]

lol thanks

[deensey.livejournal.com]

Short, to the point, and so damned good.

[domslover.livejournal.com]

awwww thank you *hugs*

[deensey.livejournal.com]

You're welcome! really, thank teardrop69 she pointed me towards this group yesterday! [bounces]

[domslover.livejournal.com]

teardrop we all bow to ur wisdom

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[teardrop69.livejournal.com]

*blush*

[azrhiaz.livejournal.com]

Well, a drabble is, by definition, one hundred words exactly. So this is not a drabble; rather, it's a 112 word ficlet.

Also, you might want to consider a couple of commas for ‘God love you Billy’, as the way it currently reads, God loves Billy. Which, while I'm sure He does, is probably not what you meant to say.

Unless, of course, with the chanting, you were going for a Catholic subtext.

[domslover.livejournal.com]

for some bizarre reason when you copy and post from word it misses out your commas, hmmmm thats not heathly.

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[domslover.livejournal.com]

*still on knees* can I get up yet? just my knees are sore. *dom walks infront of her* never mind

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[teardrop69.livejournal.com]

hehe... when you're done with him, send him my way? *clears throat*

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[domslover.livejournal.com]

do u hav billy? we can swop for a bit.