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Title: At the end of the line.
Author: raynemaiden
Rating: G
Pairing: Open to reader interpretation.
Disclaimer: First post and not beta'd.
Summary: What do you say when it's the end of the line?



"You promised me."

"There are no guarantees. Broken promises are the litter on the side of the highway of life."

"What the fuck is that supposed to mean? Give me a break, I don't need your armchair philosophy and bloody awful cliches, I need the person that said they loved me and would love me always."

"I did love you."

"Don't give me that shit. You don't drift away from the ones you love. Love isn't a phase, it isn't a detour on your path to self righteousness. Tell me that you will be there for me tomorrow."

"I won't lie."

"That's what I thought. How very fucking noble of you. I extend my sincere gratitude along with explicit directions on where you can shove it."

"I'm sorry if that's how you feel."

"Uh huh, are you getting off on this? Being so calm and cool while I rail against you? Does it make you feel vindicated somehow that you managed to be devoid of emotion while I break apart?"

"I'm not doing this to hurt you."

"Well fuck me, maybe I want to hurt. And you know what I think, I think I want you to hurt too. How is that for taking the high road? Show some fucking guts and fight like a proper bastard."

"What, do you want to hit me? Hit me then. You want to scream and rant at me then go right ahead. What are you waiting for?"

"I wouldn't give you the satisfaction you sadistic mother fucker."

"Now that was a bit low wasn't it."

"Oh fuck you. I loved you, I love you still, and I am nothing to you but yesterdays trash. You owe me. You owe me this much. I deserve the opportunity to tear you apart."

"As you wish."

"You're an infuriating bastard, you know that."

"So you've said."

Comments

[starlikeshadow.livejournal.com]

Dayum. I liked this, i mean, it was harsh and I loved howDommie the first person cussed out Billeh the second person.

I think this fic would fit any pairing, but I do think you know who I saw it as. Good show!

[raynemaiden.livejournal.com]

Thank you for the lovely feedback! I'm glad that you formed your own pairing of choice out of this, that was the exact effect I was looking for.

[shards-of-fire.livejournal.com]

Wow. All dialogue is very cool. I felt all sorts of people as I read through it, which was really rocking. Absolutely full of best lines, I can't quote one best one, so let's just say my favorite line was the whole thing :)

[shards-of-fire.livejournal.com]

Oh, and might I add: Congrats on your first post, and keep going!

[raynemaiden.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for both your feedback and your encouragement. It means a lot.

[philomel.livejournal.com]

You posted this! Hurray! :)

Just out of curiousity, was there a pairing you had in mind when you wrote this? You don't need to answer here if you don't want to... or at all. I'm nosy. ;)

[raynemaiden.livejournal.com]

Yes, I was terrified to do it but I did thanks to Nic's encouragement.
I did indeed have a pairing in mind when I wrote it, the aggressor was Dom and the passive character was Orlando.