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Ficlet: Tell

Tell
Orlando/Elijah, PG
Orlando tells Elijah seven things about himself



This is Orlando. He gives himself lopsided hair cuts, could never run a mile underneath twelve minutes (he edges around fifteen minutes if he’s having a good day), and has an annoying habit of touching everything red – which becomes an uncomfortable situation when the red is connected to a woman’s skirt and he gets whacked a couple of times.

If someone tells him to name three things about himself, he goes with those. Good conversation starter, he thinks.

“Tell me seven things about yourself.” Elijah says, ear filled with Orlando’s heart, arm wrapped around sweetly slicked skin. “Tell me things I don’t know.”

“I’m blah blah blah. Boring, whatever.”

“Just tell me.”

“Ok.”

So Orlando does.

Orlando tells Elijah, while they’re watching an obscure movie about mobsters, that he believes in wishing on stars and witches that are beautiful and nice and evil.

While his hands are being warmed by soap suds, that he thought the Tooth Fairy was a real woman who sneaked into bedrooms to steal teeth to build her gigantic castle in the land where Bambi and Cinderella lived. He believed this until he was thirteen.

Elijah’s lips curve around his neck and Orlando says: I worry that I’m going to be alone. That after my family is gone, everything will disappear. Elijah’s mouth doesn’t slip words into Orlando’s ears, but his arms hold onto everything Orlando offers.

As they lie on the grass and try to figure out cloud shapes: A girl told me to prove I liked her so I broke my pointer finger. She thought that I was weird and – yeah, didn’t get the bird.

When the bedroom is quiet and Elijah snores bounces off the walls, Orlando tells the night that he was once committed and sometimes wonders whether or not he was right in filling his stomach with so many colorful pills.

In the car, with the air condition on high: I think that every time you think you see something move in the corner of your eye, it’s a spirit moving quickly into another life.

The last thing Orlando tells him is: I never really thought you would fall for me ever.

Elijah is quiet. And then Elijah’s words float around him and presses against skin: This is fucking cheesy, but every time I see you, I feel this thing inside me become lighter, Orlando. Like, I can be having a complete shit day and you just appear with your stupid awesome hairdo and just be there and I just feel this insane happiness. When I'm with you, I know for sure how love looks like and feels.

And Orlando tells him without words, the feelings of his heart.

[identity profile] yukisherry.livejournal.com 2007-08-20 11:27 am (UTC)(link)
awwwwwwwwwwwww! insane happiness! tooth fairies! yay!

[identity profile] be-my-precious.livejournal.com 2007-08-20 11:45 am (UTC)(link)
omg.. that was so cute and it just made me smile a lot :)

[identity profile] frolijah-fan-54.livejournal.com 2007-08-20 12:09 pm (UTC)(link)
That was wonderful!! So sweet - thanks so much.

[identity profile] westmoon.livejournal.com 2007-08-20 05:32 pm (UTC)(link)
ear filled with Orlando’s heart

I like that phrase. Very evocative.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/tweedle_/ 2007-08-21 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
I really like the awkward Orlando you paint. And how it takes such a long time to tell about himself. And I like that Elijah is so quick and sure. Lovely contrast. Lovely fic. :)

[identity profile] feelforfaith.livejournal.com 2007-08-30 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Elijah's lips curve around his neck and Orlando says: I worry that I'm going to be alone. That after my family is gone, everything will disappear. Elijah's mouth doesn't slip words into Orlando's ears, but his arms hold onto everything Orlando offers.

I like how they fumble their way through their own feelings. This was so very lovely :).
msilverstar: (orli-elijah)

[personal profile] msilverstar 2007-09-09 04:36 am (UTC)(link)
This is fabulous, I like the way the things add up, and then there's love.

[identity profile] xsnarkasaurus.livejournal.com 2007-09-12 12:47 am (UTC)(link)
this has got an air of the silly-stupid to it, but the right kind of air. the kind that just...wraps around these two and makes them so lovely. And of course, the sweet-sad that goes with it just makes the whole thing wonderful. Thank you for sharing

[identity profile] ph34rmoi.livejournal.com 2007-12-03 10:10 am (UTC)(link)
I've probably said it before, but I'll just say it here cuz I feel like it (hee): I just love the language you use. It just.. creates the best feeling.

<3 This is so good.

[identity profile] slashorama.livejournal.com 2008-01-13 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Simply wonderful.

[identity profile] alliwantisanelf.livejournal.com 2008-10-12 07:03 am (UTC)(link)
Here by the [livejournal.com profile] mome_awards....

Tragic and sweet and funny and adorable, all at the same time. I like how Orlando seems to take his time thinking up the seven things he wants Elijah to know. There's so much trust in their relationship. So much love....

*smiles*