Wow. This really... you know, I'm really speechless. I want to write some really clear and amazing feedback for you because you really really deserve it after this, but just... I don't have the words. This was so REAL, and VIVID, and it didn't even read or feel like "fan fic" to me, you could change the names and it would be an amazing piece of original fiction on its own merit, and really? It is. The whole thing is so amazingly haunting and kept me in a chokehold from the first words, especially with the building feeling of impending doom, though I wasn't sure for whom.

Just wow.