ext_94410 ([identity profile] timour.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2007-01-31 10:25 am
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Retribution Chapter 7 Viggo/Shane West Orlando NC-17

Very late update. Earlier Chapters at my LJ

Title: Retribution
Author: Rose rosetimour@aol.com feedback muchly appreciated, in fact, its needed.
Type: RPS
Pairings: Viggo Mortensen/ Shane West
Rating: NC-17 eventually
Warning: AU. The fic is going to involves BDSM, a Sub/Dom relationship, punishment, violence, humiliation and everything else that I can think of that goes with this. If that bothers you, don’t read it. You have been warned
Disclaimer: Not mine, these men are there own, they are human so this fic can’t be real, I don’t think Viggo and Shane know each other and as much I don’t want to believe it this is all in my imagination. I mean no harm by it, this is all in good fun.
Archive: Anywhere, if you want it just ask, and only ‘cos I love knowing were my stuff is.
Summary: Eons ago Heaven and Hell made rules that would allow them to live in peace with each other. When one Demon breaks the most sacred of these laws the consequences are dire.
Cast: Angels:- Viggo, Orlando, Elijah (its only a cameo), The Metatron. She can be who ever you want.
Demons: Lucifer. I can’t cast him, so it’s up to you, whoever you imagine. Suggestions are welcome.
Shane West- if you don’t know who he is go look him up, trust me it’s worth your while.
NOTE:- This fic deals with Heaven, Hell, Angels and Demons, I mean no offence by any of it, so please don’t take any.



Part Seven
Understanding
The Place Between:-

Shane did not know how long he was forced to stand there, nor did he know how he had managed to stay standing but somehow he did.
Warm blood oozed down his back and Shane could feel it collecting on his legs and around his feet. Drying, warm and sticky to his skin.
Just when he thought there was no way he could stay standing Viggo stopped his torture, drawing back slightly.

“Would you have me heal you now, boy?” The Angel asked clearly.

Shane could not see for the tears clouding his vision but he understood the reason for the pain as clear as day.

“No, my Lord, for it is no more than the punishment I deserve for my actions.”

“Very good, child.” Viggo whispered allowing Shane to collapse back into him. “That will do for now.” He said, carrying him back to the bed. “Rest for now, the second stage of the Retribution will start tomorrow.”
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Shane awoke from his sleep curled up on the bed. He was still in pain but it was lessoning and movement didn’t hurt as much as it had before. Sitting up he looked around the room. Viggo stood with his back to him facing a fireplace Shane was sure hadn’t been there before. Unsure if the Angel knew he was awake but understanding for the first time that his punishment needed to happen he spoke quietly.

“My Lord?”

Viggo was so deep in thought Shane had to repeat himself three times before the Angel turned to him.

“You’re awake.”

“Yes, my Lord.”

“Good, then the second stage of your punishment may begin. I want you to think upon the best way for you to repent and I will return shortly.” Saying that Viggo vanished leaving Shane frowning deeply.

Heaven:-

“Is it really necessary.” Orlando asked once more.

Viggo stood before him patiently, “Yes child, I’m afraid it is. But you have nothing to fear. Even if he could hurt you while in the Place Between he would not.”

A small frown creased Orlando’s brow before he looked up at Viggo, trust filling his chocolate eyes.

“Ok.” He said and smiled gently at the older Angel.

“Very good, then let us go.”

Outside The Place Between:-

Viggo and Orlando stood in the swirling mist on the border of the place between.

“Wait here Orlando.” Viggo instructed before stepping forward. Just as he was about to pass into the world between Orlando spoke.

“What am I suppose to do?”

Viggo smiled warmly at the younger Angel, “What would you do to the one that hurt you?” He asked stepping back towards Orlando.

“I do not know, I couldn’t hurt him, I mean, I know he’s a demon, but I couldn’t…” Orlando said, his words rushed and his expression panicked.

“Hush.” Viggo said embracing Orlando gently before looking into his eyes. “Is that why you think I’ve brought you here, to hurt him?”

“Well…”

“No Orlando, you are not here to cause the Demon pain, I know you could not, that is what makes you better than him. You respect the laws of our Lord God and would not hurt another. No, I do not want you to hurt him, however I want you to think, carefully about what you felt when he struck you.”

Orlando stood looking at Viggo for a moment.

“Well, what did you feel?”

“Pain,” Orlando whispered, “but not just from where he, I was hurt, inside.”

“You were ashamed and affronted by what he did.”

“Yes.” Orlando nodded in affirmation at Viggo’s words.

“You did not understand how he could act in such a way.”

Orlando simply nodded again.

“He does not understand the laws as you do, that is why the retribution must be dealt. I believe he cannot truly be punished for his actions until he has been made to understand not just that what he did was wrong but why it was. Now, what would you do to one that hurt you?” Viggo asked again.

Orlando smiled slightly “I’m not sure, but I want him to be sorry,” Orlando whispered.

“Good.” Viggo said quietly, stroking Orlando’s curls. “Now wait here.” He said before passing into the place between.