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Title: Tell me (III)
Author: Lorelai
Pairing: EW/OB
Rating: NC-17, kink
Beta: not-a-lamb
A/N: This is my first fic and feedback is most welcome but please be gentle!!
Author: Lorelai
Pairing: EW/OB
Rating: NC-17, kink
Beta: not-a-lamb
A/N: This is my first fic and feedback is most welcome but please be gentle!!
Orlando went completely still. He didn’t say anything. Didn’t move.
Even his breathing was controlled and silent.
“What do you mean ‘no’? Get off!” Orlando's struggling increased and he
tried hard to push his hips off the ground and flip them over.That
is, until he felt the hard ridge of Elijahs cock press against his
hipbone, then he just stopped and closed his eyes.
“NO, I am not mad and NO, I will not let you go Orlando”, said Elijah in a
suprisingly calm and steady voice. Inside his mind, though, a voice
yelled at him ‘You stupid motherfucker this is the worst fucking thing you
EVER could have done to him!’ Elijah hesitated and tried to compose himself but
tried hard to push his hips off the ground and flip them over.That
is, until he felt the hard ridge of Elijahs cock press against his
hipbone, then he just stopped and closed his eyes.
“NO, I am not mad and NO, I will not let you go Orlando”, said Elijah in a
suprisingly calm and steady voice. Inside his mind, though, a voice
yelled at him ‘You stupid motherfucker this is the worst fucking thing you
EVER could have done to him!’ Elijah hesitated and tried to compose himself but
what he actually said was an unsure “Not until you tell me what’s wrong”.
Orlando went completely still. He didn’t say anything. Didn’t move.
Even his breathing was controlled and silent. Elijah could feel Orlando's
heartbeat, strong and fast, in his wrists where he held him down and his
warm and slightly damp breath caress his throat.
Suddely, he realised that Orlando's stillness could possibly have been
him submitting to Elijah like a good sub. Or perhaps it was a trick? If he
let go of Orlando’s wrists and he kept them above his head, that would
be proof enough. Then again, Orlando could slip away or attack him. He
really did know how to fight, so perpaps some soft words would do?
“Good boy...”, he praised in a hushed tone and Orlando's reaction was to
release a couple of quiet sobs “You are doing fine... Just fine, Orli-boy.”
He saw how tears begun to escape Orlando's squeezed shut eyelids and
disappear down his cheeks and into his hair. “I can’t stad seeing you this
Orlando went completely still. He didn’t say anything. Didn’t move.
Even his breathing was controlled and silent. Elijah could feel Orlando's
heartbeat, strong and fast, in his wrists where he held him down and his
warm and slightly damp breath caress his throat.
Suddely, he realised that Orlando's stillness could possibly have been
him submitting to Elijah like a good sub. Or perhaps it was a trick? If he
let go of Orlando’s wrists and he kept them above his head, that would
be proof enough. Then again, Orlando could slip away or attack him. He
really did know how to fight, so perpaps some soft words would do?
“Good boy...”, he praised in a hushed tone and Orlando's reaction was to
release a couple of quiet sobs “You are doing fine... Just fine, Orli-boy.”
He saw how tears begun to escape Orlando's squeezed shut eyelids and
disappear down his cheeks and into his hair. “I can’t stad seeing you this
unhappy, mate. Let me help you.”
‘Fuck... fuck...Maybe I should let him go...or kiss him...I wonder what
he taste like...the tears must be salty but...his mouth...’ Slowly he ceased
‘Fuck... fuck...Maybe I should let him go...or kiss him...I wonder what
he taste like...the tears must be salty but...his mouth...’ Slowly he ceased
his firm grips of Orlandos wrist's, whilst staring at Orlando and trying to
determine if it was a good thing or not when he started to writhe and struggle
again.
It was a good thing because he felt the not so subtle nudge of Orlando’s cock
between his asscheeks but then Orlando’s eyes opened and the frustration
in them was a shock to Elijah.
“You are such a coward!” snapped Orlando. “You have me, right where you always
“You are such a coward!” snapped Orlando. “You have me, right where you always
wanted me, and now you...just.. stopped!?”
“I know what I want, Orlando”, he said in a suprisingly steady and calm voice and scooted
“I know what I want, Orlando”, he said in a suprisingly steady and calm voice and scooted
down a bit to sit on Orlando's thighs, to have him well and truly trapped beneath
him again. “I want you to tell me what you want, what you've hoped would happen
between us. Please answer carefully.”
Orlando squirmed and started to say something but changed his mind and met Elijah’s
Orlando squirmed and started to say something but changed his mind and met Elijah’s
eyes before his eyes slid down his face to the mouth. His eyes told Elijah exactly what he
wanted but he remained silent. The tension between them intensified and ignited a fire in
Elijah, who suddnely lunged and claimed Orlando’s lips in a fierce, hard kiss.
It was nothing like in his dreams.
Orlando's teeth pierced his bottom lip and Elijah wimpered like a fucking
puppy or something, but he didn’t pull back and before long he felt Orlandos
toungue soothingly lick the wounded flesh. Tentatively he parted his lips
and flicked the tip of his toungue against Orlando's. Orlando, though, bit
him again and again. The metallic taste of his own blood was strong but the
slick hot inside of Orlando's mouth was sweet and addictive. “Stop
biting me!” Elijah groaned and fisted his left hand in the long hair of
the man beneath him. Jerking his head back, he started to lick and nibble
his way down Orlando's throat.
The skin at the junction between neck and shoulder was warm and slightly
salty and he caught the scent of soap and something more, something that was
It was nothing like in his dreams.
Orlando's teeth pierced his bottom lip and Elijah wimpered like a fucking
puppy or something, but he didn’t pull back and before long he felt Orlandos
toungue soothingly lick the wounded flesh. Tentatively he parted his lips
and flicked the tip of his toungue against Orlando's. Orlando, though, bit
him again and again. The metallic taste of his own blood was strong but the
slick hot inside of Orlando's mouth was sweet and addictive. “Stop
biting me!” Elijah groaned and fisted his left hand in the long hair of
the man beneath him. Jerking his head back, he started to lick and nibble
his way down Orlando's throat.
The skin at the junction between neck and shoulder was warm and slightly
salty and he caught the scent of soap and something more, something that was
pure Orlando. He could feel him tremble and moan when he licked and sucked at a
sensitive spot. Slowly he released Orlandos wrist and whispered an order against his
skin.
“Don’t move!” Elijah growled. He was throbbing with arousal and squeezed his
skin.
“Don’t move!” Elijah growled. He was throbbing with arousal and squeezed his
hand in between them to adjust himself and he could feel Orlando's equally hard
length to the back of his hand. ‘Oh, god’, he thought,’This is really happening.He
feel so good, I can’t wait to touch and taste all of him!’
He lifted his mouth from the dark purple mark he made and pushed the red
t-shirt up high enough to seal his lips over Orlandos right nipple. Eagerly, he curled
the toungue around the stiff peak and bit down on it several times.
A grasp of pain escaped Orlando, but he didn’t move and his eyes were
almost black with need.The frustration was no longer present. With slightly parted lips,
his breathing was almost noisy in the otherwise silent kitchen, apart of the refrigerators
A grasp of pain escaped Orlando, but he didn’t move and his eyes were
almost black with need.The frustration was no longer present. With slightly parted lips,
his breathing was almost noisy in the otherwise silent kitchen, apart of the refrigerators
low humming. ‘So responsive and he clearly enjoy this as much as I do’, Elijah mused and
trailed a line of open-mouthed kisses towards the sun tattoo and lower still to mouth Orlando’s denim clad erection.
“I want to taste you, Orli. Are you okay with that?”, Elijah asked in earnest and was rewarded with a lazy smile and a confirming nod but Orlando still flinched when Elijah's small, nail-bitten fingers cupped his bullocks and gently squeezed them.
“Are you sure?”
“Yes... please... ”, Orlando begged, and tried to push up into Elijah's touch and even spread his legs a bit.
“No. I said don’t move”, Elijah scolded and, stopping altogether, got up and
“No. I said don’t move”, Elijah scolded and, stopping altogether, got up and
left a very horny and confused Orlando on the kitchen floor.
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You cannot leave me or poor Orli like that, its just to cruel.
You better be writing right now, please, please, please be writing more.
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But there is still a TBC at the bottom... see?
-Lorelai
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By the way, to reply to a comment in LJ, click on the 'Reply to this' link, not the 'Post a new comment' link. That way, your answer will go to the person's messages or email.
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'bout the button....I know, I just wanted to thank them all in one go - haha- lazy saturday morning and all....
-Lorelai
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Odd comment, but does anyone else love it when people use the word "scooted"?