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Retribution Chapter 5 NC-17
Title: Retribution
Author: Rose rosetimour@aol.com feedback muchly appreciated, in fact, its needed.
Type: RPS
Pairings: Viggo Mortensen/ Shane West
Rating: NC-17 eventually
Warning: AU. The fic is going to involves BDSM, a Sub/Dom relationship, punishment, violence, humiliation and everything else that I can think of that goes with this. If that bothers you, don’t read it. You have been warned
Disclaimer: Not mine, these men are there own, they are human so this fic can’t be real, I don’t think Viggo and Shane know each other and as much I don’t want to believe it this is all in my imagination. I mean no harm by it, this is all in good fun.
Archive: Anywhere, if you want it just ask, and only ‘cos I love knowing were my stuff is.
Summary: Eons ago Heaven and Hell made rules that would allow them to live in peace with each other. When one Demon breaks the most sacred of these laws the consequences are dire.
Cast: Angels:- Viggo, Orlando, Elijah (its only a cameo), The Metatron. She can be who ever you want.
Demons: Lucifer. I can’t cast him, so it’s up to you, whoever you imagine. Suggestions are welcome.
Shane West- if you don’t know who he is go look him up, trust me it’s worth your while.
NOTE:- This fic deals with Heaven, Hell, Angels and Demons, I mean no offence by any of it, so please don’t take any.
Part Five
Pain
The Place Between:-
Shane’s head pounded as he awoke. His whole body shaking with pain. It was like nothing he had ever felt before. The idea that a Demon is fond of pain is incorrect. They may find pleasure in playing with it’s boundaries but like any Angel pain for pains sake is not something they enjoy. Nor is it something they experience very often and so the sensation was almost completely alien to Shane.
“What you are feeling at this moment is pain.” Viggo’s voice broke through Shane’s thoughts. “This is what your actions have created. You caused not only the pain of Heaven but also the pain you feel at this moment. Now I can heal your wounds and broken bones before we continue or I can leave you with them, something I promise will make what is going to happen greatly more painful. The choice is yours and can only be achieved through your actions. So, what will it be, boy?”
Shane truly did not want to answer the Angel. He did not want to give him the satisfaction. Yet, as he lay there silent, every breath causing him a more excruciating pain than he had ever imagined possible he knew that to survive the next moment let alone the next week he would need to be healed and he could not do it himself.
“Just a few simple words, boy, that is all it will take.”
“Please,” Shane whispered, closing his eyes with disgust.
“Please what boy.” Viggo’s voices washed over Shane like freezing water, cold and icy.
“Please, my Lord,” Shane ground out, turning his head away.
“Very good child.” Viggo said, laying his hands gently upon Shane’s chest, “That will do for now.”
The Angel closed his eyes and whispered ancient words. Shane waited, and then it hit him. He felt like a bolt of lightening had struck him. His body jerked violently from the bed a silent scream escaping his lips before he collapsed back, panting.
His body felt warm and his breathing was easy again.
Through the haze he saw Viggo raise an eyebrow. Knowing exactly what the Angel wanted to hear and being to exhausted to fight he spoke once more into the silent room.
“Thank you, my Lord.”
“Good boy,” Viggo said, gently stroking Shane’s bare chest with a powerful hand. “Now then child, as we have that out of the way we can start your punishment."
Shane closed his eyes, trying to block out the fear that had wrapped its hands around his being erasing all traces of his previous bravado. The memory of the pain was to close and the idea of an entire week of being beaten was too much for him. He curled himself up upon the bed, trying to become as small as possible.
“No you don’t, boy, you can’t hide from this.” Viggo spoke quietly but firmly, placing his hand upon Shane’s shoulder and rolling him back. Shane allowed the Angel to move him, lifting his hands above his head. When he felt cold metal close around his wrists he squeezed his eyes closed even tighter, trying to block out what was happening.
Viggo could see Shane’s youth, his fear and confusion about what was happening but there was nothing else to be done. His punishment must be completed and though he was obviously afraid Viggo knew he was not yet truly sorry for his actions.
Closing the second cuff around a slender wrist Viggo locked the young demonin place, preventing him from being able to turn over or move much at all.
“Open your eyes child.”
Shane slowly and reluctantly opened his eyes to find Viggo looking down at him, something he was unable to place in his eyes.
After what seemed like an eternity to Shane the Angel spoke.
“My retribution will come in three stages, punishment for your actions, your repentance and finally ensuring that you shall never act in such a way again. I will know when each stage is complete. Now, let us begin.
Author: Rose rosetimour@aol.com feedback muchly appreciated, in fact, its needed.
Type: RPS
Pairings: Viggo Mortensen/ Shane West
Rating: NC-17 eventually
Warning: AU. The fic is going to involves BDSM, a Sub/Dom relationship, punishment, violence, humiliation and everything else that I can think of that goes with this. If that bothers you, don’t read it. You have been warned
Disclaimer: Not mine, these men are there own, they are human so this fic can’t be real, I don’t think Viggo and Shane know each other and as much I don’t want to believe it this is all in my imagination. I mean no harm by it, this is all in good fun.
Archive: Anywhere, if you want it just ask, and only ‘cos I love knowing were my stuff is.
Summary: Eons ago Heaven and Hell made rules that would allow them to live in peace with each other. When one Demon breaks the most sacred of these laws the consequences are dire.
Cast: Angels:- Viggo, Orlando, Elijah (its only a cameo), The Metatron. She can be who ever you want.
Demons: Lucifer. I can’t cast him, so it’s up to you, whoever you imagine. Suggestions are welcome.
Shane West- if you don’t know who he is go look him up, trust me it’s worth your while.
NOTE:- This fic deals with Heaven, Hell, Angels and Demons, I mean no offence by any of it, so please don’t take any.
Part Five
Pain
The Place Between:-
Shane’s head pounded as he awoke. His whole body shaking with pain. It was like nothing he had ever felt before. The idea that a Demon is fond of pain is incorrect. They may find pleasure in playing with it’s boundaries but like any Angel pain for pains sake is not something they enjoy. Nor is it something they experience very often and so the sensation was almost completely alien to Shane.
“What you are feeling at this moment is pain.” Viggo’s voice broke through Shane’s thoughts. “This is what your actions have created. You caused not only the pain of Heaven but also the pain you feel at this moment. Now I can heal your wounds and broken bones before we continue or I can leave you with them, something I promise will make what is going to happen greatly more painful. The choice is yours and can only be achieved through your actions. So, what will it be, boy?”
Shane truly did not want to answer the Angel. He did not want to give him the satisfaction. Yet, as he lay there silent, every breath causing him a more excruciating pain than he had ever imagined possible he knew that to survive the next moment let alone the next week he would need to be healed and he could not do it himself.
“Just a few simple words, boy, that is all it will take.”
“Please,” Shane whispered, closing his eyes with disgust.
“Please what boy.” Viggo’s voices washed over Shane like freezing water, cold and icy.
“Please, my Lord,” Shane ground out, turning his head away.
“Very good child.” Viggo said, laying his hands gently upon Shane’s chest, “That will do for now.”
The Angel closed his eyes and whispered ancient words. Shane waited, and then it hit him. He felt like a bolt of lightening had struck him. His body jerked violently from the bed a silent scream escaping his lips before he collapsed back, panting.
His body felt warm and his breathing was easy again.
Through the haze he saw Viggo raise an eyebrow. Knowing exactly what the Angel wanted to hear and being to exhausted to fight he spoke once more into the silent room.
“Thank you, my Lord.”
“Good boy,” Viggo said, gently stroking Shane’s bare chest with a powerful hand. “Now then child, as we have that out of the way we can start your punishment."
Shane closed his eyes, trying to block out the fear that had wrapped its hands around his being erasing all traces of his previous bravado. The memory of the pain was to close and the idea of an entire week of being beaten was too much for him. He curled himself up upon the bed, trying to become as small as possible.
“No you don’t, boy, you can’t hide from this.” Viggo spoke quietly but firmly, placing his hand upon Shane’s shoulder and rolling him back. Shane allowed the Angel to move him, lifting his hands above his head. When he felt cold metal close around his wrists he squeezed his eyes closed even tighter, trying to block out what was happening.
Viggo could see Shane’s youth, his fear and confusion about what was happening but there was nothing else to be done. His punishment must be completed and though he was obviously afraid Viggo knew he was not yet truly sorry for his actions.
Closing the second cuff around a slender wrist Viggo locked the young demonin place, preventing him from being able to turn over or move much at all.
“Open your eyes child.”
Shane slowly and reluctantly opened his eyes to find Viggo looking down at him, something he was unable to place in his eyes.
After what seemed like an eternity to Shane the Angel spoke.
“My retribution will come in three stages, punishment for your actions, your repentance and finally ensuring that you shall never act in such a way again. I will know when each stage is complete. Now, let us begin.