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fellowshippers2003-09-04 01:56 pm
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Restraint (revised)
Title: Restraint (revised)
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purpleinkblot (also known as, spillingvelvet)
Pairing: Orlando Bloom/Viggo Mortensen
Rating: erm... i suppose.. R
Summary: sometimes ya gotta just say it.
Authors Note: beta'd byfangirl_lizzie and killerbunys (fantastic, ladies!). it was shorter, and the angst level is still up to the reader's interpretation, and i'm still just a sucker for mushy stuff, But ukcalico suggested lengthening it, so i give you another paragraph. also posted in ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
orlandoslash and my fanfic journal purpleinkblot
Feedback: PLEASE!!!
Disclaimer: this is one big fat (but well executed, if you ask me) LIE!!!
Restraint - by Molly
Orlando’s mouth curled and he felt his incisors bite sharply into his bottom lip. Just waiting, waiting to utter the phrase bubbling quietly under his tongue. Ready to let it roll forward and launch itself into anyone's ears who was within a twenty-foot radius. But he really only meant it for one person and just holding it back was like trying to restrain a bullet sliding smoothly through the barrel of a gun. But Jesus, wasn't that what he was doing?
His hands kept slipping down Viggo’s stomach, and kissing his breathy mouth tasted like copper and sweat and semen and how, how, could he possibly be thinking about keeping silent? A tight liquid groan pierced the fog inside Orlando’s head and he had to tuck his face into the crook of Viggo’s neck to keep from issuing an answer. Can’t can’t can’t.
He pumped quietly and efficiently into Viggo's body and resigned himself to the fact that it was better if he kept it quiet, since people were asleep in the next room and he might as well choke it down and settle for a few low, throaty moans. Viggo had other ideas, though, as he clenched and arched and stretched; Orlando was helpless to resist and finally he let go.
"I love you."
Author:
purpleinkblot (also known as, spillingvelvet)Pairing: Orlando Bloom/Viggo Mortensen
Rating: erm... i suppose.. R
Summary: sometimes ya gotta just say it.
Authors Note: beta'd by
fangirl_lizzie and killerbunys (fantastic, ladies!). it was shorter, and the angst level is still up to the reader's interpretation, and i'm still just a sucker for mushy stuff, But ukcalico suggested lengthening it, so i give you another paragraph. also posted in orlandoslash and my fanfic journal purpleinkblotFeedback: PLEASE!!!
Disclaimer: this is one big fat (but well executed, if you ask me) LIE!!!
Restraint - by Molly
Orlando’s mouth curled and he felt his incisors bite sharply into his bottom lip. Just waiting, waiting to utter the phrase bubbling quietly under his tongue. Ready to let it roll forward and launch itself into anyone's ears who was within a twenty-foot radius. But he really only meant it for one person and just holding it back was like trying to restrain a bullet sliding smoothly through the barrel of a gun. But Jesus, wasn't that what he was doing?
His hands kept slipping down Viggo’s stomach, and kissing his breathy mouth tasted like copper and sweat and semen and how, how, could he possibly be thinking about keeping silent? A tight liquid groan pierced the fog inside Orlando’s head and he had to tuck his face into the crook of Viggo’s neck to keep from issuing an answer. Can’t can’t can’t.
He pumped quietly and efficiently into Viggo's body and resigned himself to the fact that it was better if he kept it quiet, since people were asleep in the next room and he might as well choke it down and settle for a few low, throaty moans. Viggo had other ideas, though, as he clenched and arched and stretched; Orlando was helpless to resist and finally he let go.
"I love you."
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That was short but effective.
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