ext_59494 ([identity profile] qaffan2004.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fellowshippers2005-08-12 10:47 pm

Hi. Long time reader, first time poster in this community. Enjoy.

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Paring: What ever you read into it
Rating: Pg-13 for language
Sumary: Angsty little drabble about 127 words
A/N: My friend was having a bad night and something I said to her tiggered me to write this. It's short and doesn't really have a paring, though I thought of my OTP while writing it. Angsty.





"Damn it! Will you just listen to me?"

"Why should I!? So you can say you're sorry!? That you love me!? It's all bullshit!" He says this as he throws something else at the other.

"Please! Listen to me!" Pleading. Tears runnng down from his eyes, "We can get through this."

"No. No. There is nothing worth this kind of pain. My heart has been shatered and I will never forgive you!" Tears also running down his cheeks. "Get out! Now!"

"No, let me talk."

"No! Go!" Another vase broken on the wall.

"Fine! But I need you to know I love you!" A quick escape out the front door.

"Liar!" A picture frame this time. A picture of them. On his knees, in the living room, he weeps.

[identity profile] pecos.livejournal.com 2005-08-13 04:57 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice, if by nice I mean sad, which is what you were going for! Congrats on your first post! Now swrite us some more, eh?

[identity profile] odisowner.livejournal.com 2005-08-13 02:15 pm (UTC)(link)
This was good in that bad, hurt me kinda way!