FIC: All the Time (SB/VM, PG-13, 1/1)

[karelian]

I warned you that these "All..." stories were going to turn into a long sappy series. I blame cinzia, who is responsible for everything. I also blame ashinae, because watching songvids about the Devil leads me into temptation. This is a sequel to "All Right" and "All Better".

Disclaimer: This is fiction, never happened, never will.

Summary: These precious days we live through get thrown away like tissue; I wish that I could give you all the time in the world. (Lyric by Beth Nielsen Chapman.)

( All The Time )

Comments

wow!

[silentfire.livejournal.com]

you are amazing. this is a lovely series, each part beautifully written.

but then, all your stories are. expect to receive a long, gushing email filled with exclamation points sometime in the near future ::wink::

so . . . when do we get the next part?

*SWOON*

[ldybastet.livejournal.com]

Aaaaaahhhh!
So beautiful.. and so full of hope, even though mingled with a bit of fear about the future. This is how I want it to feel like when I finally meet the love of my life :-)

But Viggo laughs, unburdened by the clock, and you realize as you hear the freedom in his voice that he'll make sure you have all the time you need.

Love this line. Because this is what love is very much about. Living in the moment. Now. Together. Not worrying about the next moment... because when we do we miss the moment that is now.. *sighs*

Wonderful writing. I really enjoy this :-)
*gives you a hug and re-reads the story from the beginning (part1)*

Wow

[tryllian.livejournal.com]

This series is getting better and better. I admire your flawless command of the second person pov, and I'm insanely in love with your Viggo and Bean (and with you).

This sentence did me in completely:

"You wonder if you knew somehow...if the part of your brain that obviously doesn't talk to the rest of you had it figured out weeks ago, and that's why all of this, though unexpected, hasn't shocked you beyond the dizziness."

*falls on floor and worships you*

[lannamichaels]

This was wonderful. I loved how you interlaced the idea of time, too little or maybe just enough, into the fic. Time is, after all, what we make of it. *snerk*

Since you said this was turning into a series, could I convince you to write more? //bribe

[msilverstar]

Delicious, what a lovely series, makes me smile like a fool to read such great romance. You write so well, all the little details and dialog and feelings. Tidbits like the blush just blow me away.

Re: wow!

[karelian]

Thank you! Am very much looking forward to long, gushing email with exclamation points. My favorite kind!

Part IV will have to wait until after the Devil is finished with me, and certain people will spank me if I don't work on "Another Island" soon (looks around nervously for Minions #1 and #2...)

Re: Wow

[karelian]

Hey you! Welcome to LJ! Glad you finally made it!

Flawless command...bwahahahaha. But thank you.

*loves you too*

Re: *SWOON*

[karelian]

Thank you! *gives you a hug back*

You know, it was sort of like this when I met my husband -- perhaps I am Mary Sueing *runs and cowers under desk in terror*. Though he is NOTHING like the way I'm writing Viggo *pokes head back out nervously*.

Part IV is completely outside my experience, at least. *g*

[karelian]

No bribe necessary -- the Characters Who Live In My Head are not giving me a vote in the matter. (They outnumber me and they know how to rugby-tackle...)

Thank you though! And yeah, LOL about time...

[karelian]

Aagh! You used the R word! *blushes and hides* Thank you, I think! *g*

[leici.livejournal.com]

I just finally got the chance to read this and ohmigosh! So good. I love the way you write these guys. So real and well paced and human and *gush gush*. Yayness!

[karelian]

Thank you! I felt like the pace was rushed but I was rushing to beat the clock so there wasn't much I could do about it. I'm glad it worked for you!